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Reviewed By: Kristie On: April 29, 2004 22:28 CDT
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OMG great lemon and great chapter you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 17:55 CDT
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OMG great chapter you have to update it really soon ok thanks tootles
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Reviewed By: hi On: March 23, 2004 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good i love it dont just stop and never go on again make it long and REALLY REALLY good ok i love it so far well i hope u have a good b-day mine is march 27th ill be 14 well anyways keep updating ok plus i hate kikyo
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha's-Sweetheart On: March 16, 2004 09:29 CST
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Great job. Please write more. Great story. Wow. You are talented. Whoohoo! Sorry...hyyyyper. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sapphire Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 17:09 CST
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Very good *clap clap clap* Bravo, this is a good story, keep up the good work
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Title: This ota be fun! >:)
Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouch!!! Thats got to hurt yah Kikyo*cough, cough, BITCH, coughm cough* >:) This should be most entertaining to read. I love this thing!!! I was kinda hopeing you would make Kag an hanyou, but ok. *shruges* Whatever you do, just one thing..... KEEP INUAND KAG A COUPLE!!!! Well till you update next, bye!!! ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 17:46 CST
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Hey i love the story and i cant wait to see what happends so update really soon ok thanks tootles
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Title: Nice.
Reviewed By: Grifter(Not Logged In) On: January 22, 2004 13:04 CST
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Hey. I like where you are going with this. I want to know more. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: schwong (not logged in) On: January 15, 2004 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good. I think Kagome is gonna dive infront of Inu before Kikyo's (my guess) arrow hits him--well that would be the common action that would happen in that type of situation--. I think Inu and Kagome should live together in Kagome's time. I want the wish to be really unpredictable (example: not that they'll live together or be together forever or something). Keep on writing! I wanna read more.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that was great. please make this inu/kag not kik/inu (gross *burns eyes*) i really like this story. please keep updateing. i have to go now. ja ne
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Reviewed By: darksqall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 10:24 CST
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thank you ^-^
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is really good please update soon!!! ^_^ I really like it!!!
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Reviewed By: darksqall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 14:07 CST
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it was pretty good o plz update doon O-O pweez???
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed this and even more it seemed more real than some of the other fics. id like to see you extend this rather than end it too quick. your style of writing was good too, not to many mistakes.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 07:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iloved it. Most people make it too hard on themselves and make Inuyasha kill him as soon as they get there. Like Naraku would be that easy to kill. He'd have some tricks up his sleeve!This story had a simple and easy way of beating Naraku.I think it's a good thing that you decided not to rush the story. Gives us something to read and look forward to. Well, Hope you come up with the second chapter soon. GOOD LUCK and update soon!
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