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Reviewed By: papertiger On: April 07, 2004 21:48 CDT
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I was so excited to see that you've continued to expand this story! It is the only fic I've continued to follow in the Yu yu hakusho section! You are a very talented lemon writer (definately a good compliment :) ). Please continue, I'll read whatever you write!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. that was absolutely amazing, you are such a great writer, it was soo good, please write more, i was totally floored it was THAT great. i luved the lemons!! i wish i could write like that. PLEASE UPDATE!! this was awesome!!
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: April 01, 2004 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so well done! It's officially one of my favorites. Please keep updating! I know that it's hard, but I am totally in love with this story! Keep it going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Title: Re-Reviewing!
Reviewed By: Outai Urufu On: March 18, 2004 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, just re-reviewing to tell you to keep this going! Everyone who reviewed wants you to keep this fic alive, so don't disappoint us!!!
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Reviewed By: Pyromania On: March 13, 2004 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE HIEI AND SHIZURU!!!!!
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Title: Think I'm addicted!
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 09:08 CST
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You know…this story is kinda like drinking salt water. The more I read, the more I want. Congratulations on another excellent chapter. I figured Keiko wouldn't make it to a sixth chapter and I was right. (small hentai laugh) Nice to see Kurama got the honors and not the Youko, though I'm sure his turn is coming up next. Well…hopefully not *next* next…I do want to see more Shizuru/Hiei action, not to mention how both deal with the consequences of that bite. Now that I'm really interested in seeing. More so then the sex I think...*Slaps head* I must be high... Never more then the sex! Anyway…Please update soon! Kenya
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 15:20 CST
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Correction, and I knew I was gonna do this, it's Mary MacGregor.
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Reviewed By: animelove(not logged) On: February 20, 2004 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's so lemony fresh! Keep up the great work! i like the hiei/shizuru pairing! it's unique!
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ever hear the song Torn Between Two Lovers by Mary MacGovern? Seems Keiko has solved this problem. Imagine haveing a hot, ever ready Youko combined with the sensitive, caring, so willing to please Kurama! Oooo baby! I SO want to be Keiko. Ahem.... Anyway. Besides all that, ya got a good story going here and it's very well written. Can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully Youko get's his turn. And as always, thank you.
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Reviewed By: Hoshi_Megami On: February 15, 2004 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this story! Hiei and Shizuru...what an unlikely combination!! I wonder what Kazuma will do when he finds out about them! ^_^ Anyways, good story, and update soon! I wanna know whats happens next!
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 05:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Makes me glad divorce human style only costs thousands of dollars. Guess Hiei couldn't restrain himself. hee he. Great chapter, can't wait for the next. And as always. Thank you.
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: anonymoUS33 On: February 13, 2004 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is SWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEET!~!!~!~! Don't quit on it and UPDATE!
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Title: Hot! Hot! Hot!
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 03:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And now we're getting to the real nitty gritty. We could all wish to have as great as sex as Hiei bestowed on Shizuru, though seeing her as a virgin getting pop took some getting use to. This story is H O T and I hope you keep it that way. Write more and write it soon.
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Reviewed By: Redhedlvr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story you have going here. I love that Youko, sorry if I spelled it wrong. I'm hopeing Kurama has his chance to show his feelings as well. And if the next chapeter is about Hiei and Schizu (wrong again, I know) it should be extremely entertaining! Keep up the good work. And thanks.
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Title: This is interesting!
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, if someone had said that they was going to write a story pairing up Hiei and Shizuru then I'd have laughted until I wet myself. Of all the YYH Pairings that seems to be the most unbelievable to me, but after reading what you wrote, I can actually see the posibility of the situation. You've managed to write it in a way that makes sense for the characters personalities. Granted, the beging started off a bit choppy, but I can see stead improvements. Please, continue this story. I can't wait to see what creative genius you have in store for us next. Kenya - Princess Koriand'r
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