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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 19:38 CDT
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Okies... I am leaving yet another review... Why... Because there are more chapters now and I can! Anyway, it's getting pretty good... Although kind of wierd with how sappy it's getting... Don't yell, Iknow it's my fault and don't worry, We'll make it better... Anyways, I like where you are taking this Shinigami. BRAVO!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: awsome-r On: July 27, 2004 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome
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Reviewed By: firerose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 16:23 CDT
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I really like this story I can't wait for the next chapter. I am sorry I haven't reviewed but it has been awhile since you put up a chapter but I love this story can't wait for the next chapter. well g2g bye ^-^
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 00:27 CDT
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WHY DID YOU ASK FOR MY HELP!? I'm the freaking 'Queen of SAP' here! SO what gives!? I mean, You told me you wanted to make Kurama more harsh and cold... How is someone who can trun the 'Perfect Soldier' into a Romeo going to help you turn Kurama into a bastard!? Merf, besides... I think it's good the way it is, all it needs is a few tweaks that I can help you with and it would be golden. Seriously, I like this Kurama better than the one we started penning out in the notebook, but we'll see... Maybe we could rewrite Chapter one, and leave the original, anhd let the review in votes to see which storyline they like better.... It could work... Anyways, my vote's on what you have already with a little more BETAing! Love ya! ~R_Winner
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Reviewed By: Sly Vixen706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I really enjoyed your fanfic. mostly because of Yoko but i like all of it. As for a bad guy I'm stumped on that.
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Reviewed By: YinYang twins On: April 24, 2004 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome update pleaze
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Reviewed By: dancekitty402 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I finally get my computer to let me log in and you haven't got anything new up. You haven't updated since... march 27... OMG!!!!! What's the world coming to. Please update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Shinigami_chylde (not signed in) On: March 27, 2004 21:09 CST
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ok i'm not sure whats going on but for some reason some reviews wont show up. If u want to review really bad just E-mail me ok! well ttyl
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Reviewed By: I like it! On: March 26, 2004 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Love it! Love it! PPLLEEEAASSSSEEE write more! PAALLEEASSE!! Your story is entertaining and the suspense is killing me!!
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Reviewed By: dranzite On: March 21, 2004 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a pretty good fic all ya gotta do is spell check more often but its still pretty readable i rate it a 9-10
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Reviewed By: nikki_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey ash!!! i luvved it and no i dont have any ideas for you im sorry but iv always been in the same block as u lol well.....u could make her his luv slave lol or sumthin else depends on where you want this to go lol o well it was grrreat!!!!!ttyl-nik
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Reviewed By: dancekitty402 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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dancekitty: thats all. no way!!!!!!!*grabs computer and starts to shake it* NO!!!!!!! Kurama: you must forgive her. I keep telling her not to read the short stories. but noooooo, she goes ahead and ends up knocking her computer off the desk because she wants to know what happens next.*sighs* Dancekitty:Pweeze update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ekimozo (not logged in) On: February 21, 2004 22:15 CST
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An attitude ajustment needs to be in order for Mr. Creep. Maybe the girl might do that, **wink wink** The girl needs an equally cool name to fit her personality. She's independent, which rocks! Keep up the good work!
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Title: *smilies*
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smiles* me like ^^.......I never read this before but I am quite how things are going to work out. Since I haven't seen the serie you are going to lemme love it! PLease continue soon ^^
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