| "Resuming The Hunt" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: RomanceLady On: July 04, 2004 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi hi! I read "Strange Happenings" before this. Well I do like this one too, but like I said before... it went by quickly. More detail on setting and action would be nice, since you are working on another to add to the sequel. I'm not complaining, really. I just thought you'd like to know what your audience thinks... By the way, gomen! I gave you an eight on grammer because there were places where the flow of reading was interrupted because the absence of a comma confused me. ?_? Haha! But keep on spewing out those ideas because I love your plot.
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Title: yeah
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 15:25 CST
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I like the sequle too i really did, i can't waite to read the sequle to the sequle i think you have superbe wirting skill (unlike me). well thats it for my review......Ja Ne (awwe a babt boy i can imagin how he looks)
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Reviewed By: iire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. Did Kagome get increased strength and speed, or just Miko power? Does curse of the Jewl have her living as ling as Inu?
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Reviewed By: Cresent Gardian On: January 27, 2004 08:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super. It kept me interested, because of me and my oh so short attention span. But ggggrrrrr, I don't need to be rude by I have to come clean, that ending sucked ( cowers )if the author took time and added a couple more chapters and than ended it . It would be perfect! But ending it so quickly ( starts tisking , a problem I have ). But its still very good. ( Still gives applause )
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 17:55 CST
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I had no IDEA you made a sequal to the Hobo (I love making fun of his name) story. HOW DID THAT SLIP!?! I just read the whole thing and I LOVED IT! I didn't think Kagome getting pregnant would be ok with any story, but I thought it was cute. I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really hope you post your new story soon!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 09:40 CST
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What do you mean its only 7 chapters right now??? That's enough to put up!!!!!! I wanna read it!!!
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Reviewed By: ~Frost~bite~ On: January 23, 2004 14:58 CST
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i love this story. it is really good. i can't wait for the next chapter. when inu and kag go tell her mom that she is pregnant will be so funny. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 23, 2004 04:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa....
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Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 22:23 CST
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i agree w/inudemoness, i can't wait to see kag's mom's reaction. and inu...i bet he'll be squirming a good bit!! the fight scene w/naraku seemed awfully quick though. thx for the happy endings to several of the story lines so far!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: January 22, 2004 21:48 CST
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I can't wait until they tell Kagome's mom, its going to be sooo funny!!!!!
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Title: good, but predictable
Reviewed By: Sesshamoru's Lover On: January 21, 2004 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it just keeps getting better. your plot or whatever is close to Strange Happenings. you no, kagome is wanted, kagome is kidnaped and probably inuyasha saves her. its predictable. all i am saying is that mabey new material wouldnt be such a bad idea. but even though its predictable its still really good and i love it.
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Reviewed By: ~Frost~bite~ On: January 21, 2004 15:45 CST
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it just keeps getting better. your plot or whatever is close to Strange Happenings. you no, kagome is wanted, kagome is kidnaped and probably inuyasha saves her. its predictable. all i am saying is that mabey new material wouldnt be such a bad idea. but even though its predictable its still really good and i love it.
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 15:03 CST
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It's bouzu, not bouzo. Anyway, 'Resuming the Hunt' is turning out to be just as good as 'Strange Happenings' maybe a bit better ;) Update soon plz! Jaa na InuHime-san!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 21, 2004 03:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is exellent, you update fast, this is perfect, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed in) On: January 20, 2004 22:02 CST
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Inuyasha is soo cute when he's posessive!!! Poor Sango she has to fight her brother again!!! Update soon must know what happens!!!!!!
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