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Title: I'M STILL YELLING !!!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 13:17 CST
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UPDATE SOON AND YOUR ECB FIC SO CRONO WON'T HAVE TO KILL YOUR BISHIES AND LEAVE YOU WITH ONLY YOUR MINIONS FOR COMPANY!!!!!!!!!"Crono" Ahem ah sorry about that... I let him drink a few dozen more sodas then he should ever have... Sorry again... I LOVE YOU LE!!!!!!!"Me" UPDATE SOON1!!!!!!! *laughs evily* "Crono" -_-' *WACK SMACK CRUNCH* "Me" AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH @_@ (suddenly sane again) Why did you try to kill me again Crono? I LOVE YOU WIND!!!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 20:56 CST
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UPDATE SOON PLEASE ALSO DISREGARD THE UNIFORM. Just put me in a similar outfit as my minion except no tux, I just like black. Also I tend to hide my eyes with a hood when there is too much light(I am reactive to too much light hitting my eyes... maybe thats why I like black so much) Btw I can't wear sunglasses because I wear normal glasses... and they are not "coke-bottle" style... also UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 14:44 CST
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Some thing I found out about the way I walk... aparently I don't make any sound and suprise people who I stand behind for about five minutes.... I am also apparently "invisable" to most people meaning they don't notice me unless I talk to them... Also UPDATE SOON OR Crono WILL BE COMEING AFTER YOUR HEAD!!!!!
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Title: Added data...
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 20:05 CST
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I forgot to mention this earlier but my *ahem* and Crono's favorite attack is basically a ball of shadow flame(a ball of burning darkness) it basically torches and doesen't stop unless either Crono or myself stop it personally... My uniform is the standard catholic school uniform... yes I am still in school... put me as you see fit but I am NOT I repeat NOT a little child... UPDATE SOON PLEASE BECAUSE Crono AND MYSELF WOULD LIKE TO SEE OURSELVES AT LEAST HELPING OR KILLING OR "INTERRORGATING" SOMEONE OK? UPDATE!!!!!!1
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 17:08 CST
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COME ON WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE, HUH? PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THIS IS SUCH A GOOD WORK AND I WOULD AT LEAST LIKE TO SEE IT FINISHED.SO UPDATE SOON OK?
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Title: Me reviewing a fourth time
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only place you lost points is your spelling but it is still enjoyable to read. I LOVE YOU AND CHRONO LOVES Le(I dare not use her full name) *crunch*AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA WHY DID YOU CRUSH MY LEGS? WHY CHRONO WHY? "You were starting to get annoying..."*see "UPDATE!!!!!!" to see what happens next*
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Title: My minion
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 17:53 CST
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My minion's name is Crono (odd i knowbut*smack*oww)is my nonexistant sanity and weares a black trenchcoat over a black tux with black you get the picture and carries twin tonfa blades and a cloud's buster sword style giant sword on occasion and a .45 python in a sholder holster as well as needles he throws to kill.Basically like your Le. He also smacks me in almost all of my reviews *smack* owww that was un called for... Ahem has silver hair that he ties in a ponytail(coughweirdocough*smack smack smack boom*aaaaaaarrrrrrgggggghhhhh). He mainly just has to kill who i tell him to. While i normally wear a black a jacket over my uniform... dont ask i also use a katana and a lance... again dont ask how i learned. You can normally find me reading a book that i scribble in to activate my powers of fanfiction a book not a keyboard. I feel its easier to write then type some times. But if i'm not holding my book i have a laptop to type.I dont care about my hair but normally its well flat on my head... i also dont care what color you make it.well thats my minion and my description. Hope you add us soon...
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Almost a perfect fic... I LOVE YOUR FICS... ahem *smack* OWWWW WTF was that for Crono? *smack smack smack* THAT'S IT YOUR GOING BACK TO MY SUBCONCIOUS YOU $%*@&%*&^%%$$##@!$%@#^&$$$&$#$%... "Crono" STOP CURSING ALREADY!!!!!"Me" **** you and get in your prison/room"Crono" Hell no!"Me"***slash pow*tape chain*click boom!* "Crono" chough cough cough THAT WAS UNCALLED FOR!!!!! Why did you shoot me? you know I can't die as long as your alive... and I smacked you to snap you out of your insane period."Me" Oh... sorry,BUT YOUR STILL GOIN BACK INTO YOUR ROOM AND YOUR NOT COMIN OUT UNTILL I SAY SO!!! MUAHAHAHAHAAHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH... Oh dear... looks like I destroyed my room again... *sigh* well update soon or I'm sending Crono after you. As well as me shooting a .45 caliber bullet into your real world head watching you die in pain while laughing... Oops not again...*SMACK* Grrrrr thats it! "Crono" No stay back! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH "Me" AAAhh I feel much better... *twitch twitch*Well any way update soon ok?
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Title: Second review
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 06:43 CST
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... UPDATE SOON OR FACE MY PET DRAGON'S FIRE BREATH!!Ahem ah sorry about that...UPDATE!!!!!Uh sorry again.ADD MY MINION!!!!... Include your reply in the next chapter and when I see it I'll post a description of my minion on my description page... P.S my rating is the same as last time... YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!! Sorry again...
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Title: A new ... critic
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this fic since it made me laugh and literally fall out of my chair laughing... keep up the zaney and good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: nhamot [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 18:53 CDT
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*tilts head to the side* O.o what the he- *twitch*
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Title: Well...
Reviewed By: Shihaisha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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.........best thing was the whole "Great Shiny Gods of pointy things" ^^
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Reviewed By: animefan001 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was expecting an fanfic about the manga realbout highschool. *blinks* but it wasent it suprised me.................but scence it had hiei in it ill give you a 10/10 in all aspects
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Reviewed By: Mermaid(not logged in) On: August 22, 2004 08:55 CDT
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Haha! I love stuff like this! Great job! Only I was mad...... LEGOLAS HAD ONE LINE IN THIS WHOLE THING. I'm not a rabid fangirl, but he is my favorite bishie. I read your other story about that evil care bear and Elmo. You should update with more lines for legolas.
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Reviewed By: Yarisha On: February 08, 2004 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uhhhhhhhh....That was nice.(i think). Maybe you should be MUCH! nicer to the people who review your crap. Humph. *is has annoyed as Hiei at the moment* brat -_-" i hate you *sticks tung out* GAH!!!!11 *tackles Sano**keeps talking while doing this* Well i liked the fic anyway. ummm keep up the good work ^_^;;; Bye bye *Screams of a tortured Sanosuke can be heard in the backround*
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