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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Kittencutie On: June 07, 2005 22:03 CDT
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I am SO sorry I didn't review sooner!!! I was grounded for one...my brother came to visit from Florida...Finals are tomorrow for me....I'm suprised I was even able to read it today! Anyway, it was awsome! update soon! PS: I want to start another story but I don't know what I should write about....I want it to be AU, and have the couple InuKag...and that's pretty much all i have...give me a few Ideas, pease....I might actually be able to come up with something...Well...Sorry again
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Title: Really Great Story
Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 13:10 CDT
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Hey this is a really great story I hope you update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Laterz Inuluvher151
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Reviewed By: Kouga_Lover_3056 (forgot to sign in) On: April 11, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another great chapter! Yeah, it was your advise that made it possible for me to review =P.. heheheh, thanks!=) Well, I can confidently say that your story needs no improvement what so ever! Yay for the KagomexInuyasha fluffiness!XD Update soon!^^
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Reviewed By: Kittencutie On: April 11, 2005 20:14 CDT
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I love her character in your story, just not that much in the actual series. She's...I don't know I just don't like her. Sometimes Kagome is annoying, like when she says Inuyasha's name when he saves her from a demon or something.Anyway, I'm so glad Kagome finally woke up! Update soon!!!! Oh and thanks for notifying me about your update. Hopefully, My Will, will be updated soon too!! ttyl KC
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Reviewed By: Kittencutie On: March 29, 2005 00:10 CST
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You're a kikyo lover?! Ewww! I hate that...woman!! I don't want you to suddenly hate ME but I can't help it!! I have a friend that is a kikyo lover as well, but she HATES Kagome and also Inuyasha cuz he likes Kagome instead kikyo. Anyway, I liked it and I hope Kagome wakes up soon to. I ahd to try a couple of times before I was able to get to the chapter, but at least I read it. Update soon!!!! I might be starting a new story again as well, but not until the weekend if I do. Well, like I said Update soon!!!!
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Title: Yay, I can review!
Reviewed By: Kouga_Lover_3056 (forgot to sign in) On: March 28, 2005 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I can review again! Great chapter once again! UUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAATTTTTTTEEEEEE SSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!
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Title: kittencutie
Reviewed By: Review On: March 07, 2005 18:27 CST
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Hey that was awsome and thanks for e-mailing me about you updating. When is Kagome going to wake up~! I want to see fluff between Ka and In. Oh and I hope Kikyo isn't going to be a bitch about Inuyasha and Kagome together. DIE KIKYO!!! GO BACK TO HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bitch. Not you though, Kikyo. Kikyo= bitch Sorry if you are a Kikyo lover, she's just a bitch.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Kittencutie On: February 20, 2005 00:11 CST
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I love the chappies! PLEASE update soon!! I wasn't able to review for your last chappy cause something is either screwy with my computer, not likely though, or MediaMiner that it doesn't show in the list the chappy you updated so I couldn't read it. I don't know if I have saidthis before or not but...your a great writer!! it would mean alot to me if you would read my story here. My Pen Name is kittencutie14 so if you would check it out it would de so cool to have one of my favorite authors to read my storyand maybe even review it!! Anyway, like I said, please update really really REALLY soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Kittencutie On: January 28, 2005 20:53 CST
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Oh My God thhis is such an awsome story so please update really, really, REALLY soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Esha aka Kouga_Lover_3056 (forgot to sign in) On: January 23, 2005 21:08 CST
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Awesome chapters! I was totally captivated by them and they were pretty long!^_^ Keep up the good work, you're an awesome author! (unlike me)... Anyways update as soon as you can!:D Sayonara
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Reviewed By: evil person who's actually reviewing On: January 23, 2005 18:51 CST
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okkkaaaayyyyy... I thought the chapter was short (the last one... actually, this one too)... Anywho, Sabriel is a girl that looks like a guy... not visa versa. It really isn't that boring so far, but I only read the first couple chapters... Alright, now I must admit I'm confused! Darn metaphors a puzzling phrases! "And you Miroku, to truly defeat the darkness in your heart, you must find what you left behind. Kouga, nothing is set in stone. Fear a change of heart, and you will be trapped in your own fleeting feelings." GAH!!! It's evil! I can't understand it! ::runs around in circles:: To many metaphors!!! On the other hand, A-ok chappy, I hope you update soon and yadda-yadda-yadda...
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Title: Hey I have fuzzy triangles of doom too!
Reviewed By: The evil person who doesn't review On: January 22, 2005 18:29 CST
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That was sort of short. I actually didn't skip over everything this time. Whhooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaa... it's a miracle. Anywho, I liked the smell o' vision! Yay smell o' vision! That was sort f weird though cause I eventually got totally lost because of it. And yes, you are right, FTD do eat your ears!!! I know. I've seen it. (I just had coke, which explains my hyperness) I'm not quite sure I like how this is going with the enter of the Kikyo. That looks bbbbaaaaaaaaaaddddd... like, running away from a sewer aligator in a haunted mansion bad. There will be blood by my mocha botlle! You will all be redeemed! Sabriel is really a guy! (Am I creeping you out yet?) Okay, this is proof I should never have diet coke again. I'll call you and read this review to you! BUAHAHAHAHAHAA!!! There is no escape! Oh, yeah, and I hope you review.
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Reviewed By: TwilightZone [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleeeeease update soon!! great story, i really wanna find out what happens to inuyasha and kagome ^_^ and no more cliffies. . .they are evil!
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Reviewed By: Burning_Phoenix On: December 08, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a true pleasure to read. I ask that you please continue the story since you leave us at a cliff hanger. Please please please go on I really want to see how this turns out.^^ I am a big Inuyasha fan and once I figure out how to send my fics in then you can read something I've typed. Anyways please write more soon I really wanna know what happens next. Keep up the good fic writing. And please... NO MORE CLIFF HANGERS I HATE THEM!!!!
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Title: It's a review!! Aren't you thrilled beyond all possible relief???!!!
Reviewed By: Agent Fuzz On: December 07, 2004 22:52 CST
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So, as I mentioned on the phone, I see all different points of view when looking at a story.... I was picturing Kikyo in a "DARE" shirt when I read that. Even though it doesn't fit the contex (really, really drepressing) I still thought it was hysterically funny imagining Kikyo in a dare shirt, digging through Inuyasha's pack ridding him of his pills, while he is babbling on about "But I need my pills because apparently I'm not paying attention in school because I have attetion disofficer- disofficer- attention deficit disorder- what were you saying? HI!!!!!" then Kikyo smaking him saying that he needed to get off the pills. I know, I'm a bad person, but I tend to think of funny jokes for sad things... Anyway, good job and the depressing chapter and I only wish that it was longer and filled with Sesshomaru-Rin-Jaken comedy. (God, I love that....)
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