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Reviewed By: jade_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeeeeeeeeee chibi aya!!! awwww he's so cute! i love this so far! i also like the brad/schu pairing ^_____^ i can hope you continue and have the next chapter out soon ^________________^
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Reviewed By: Amethyst_Sin On: February 12, 2004 17:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww! Cute! Keep going, this is a really cute ficcu. ;p I got kudos, if you want some...
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Reviewed By: everyday_angel83 On: February 06, 2004 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read both the fic in fanfiction.net and mediaminer, you update faster in fanfiction.net is that right? anyways, i really love this stoy, a great insight into Farfie.i hope you update soon, pls email me when you have, if it's alright!!!keep up the good work!
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Title: shindoufan@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: shu-chan On: January 30, 2004 12:41 CST
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ok...i'm not that good in english, i'm more of a french-and-german speeking person... your german is , i am afraid not correct... the correct translation is the following one: "Ich kann euch nichts sagen" or, in a polite version: "Ich kann Ihnen nichts sagen" besides that, that was great! I furthermore apologies for any english mistakes that might be present, as i am only a fourteen-year-old girl... thank you for paying heed to these comments shu-chan
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Reviewed By: Horuseye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 05:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that you decided to put your story on this site as well. Your story is so creative and catching, I really like how you describe the people and their relationships. Aya is just so cute. And I just love Farfie! Hopefully there will be a new chapter up soon!
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