| "The Problems with Raising Aya" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mistyana On: January 13, 2005 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a beautiful story that I have greatly enjoyed reading. The concept and originality are amazing. I'm so happy to see that you have continued writing on it. Please continue to write on it
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Reviewed By: Farfielover108 On: January 13, 2005 12:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update. This story is soooo good
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sad, heart warming and suspenseful. Great story, not at all what I expected. I am very, very, anxious for the next chapter, and the reunion. Please come back soon.
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Reviewed By: xiaoj aka jgal On: January 10, 2005 22:20 CST
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not bad... i am looking forward to the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 06:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like....A LOT!
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Reviewed By: Rune Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 03:03 CDT
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lovely story! sooo sad what happened to Aya and Kenken, when will they get back together? their such a wonderfull pairing and i absolutely love how you put this fanfic together, keep up the good work and dont forget to update! ^_~
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Title: SPECTACULAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: YohjiBabe2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic. it has a great plot, very creative. I would have never thought up something so spectacular!!!! Please continue to write and I will continue to review. Can't wait till the next chapter. yohjibabe2008
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Title: All 5 of us.
Reviewed By: LadySyala On: June 04, 2004 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story, and I appreciate the detail you put into it. Not many fan fic authors remember them. I have about 5 other friends who are reading this story along with me, so don't think of this as one review, but 5 different ones. We all love this story, so update soon, Bye!! LadySyala, Tishaminga, Hyper, Shinigami, and rebel_chick
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Reviewed By: inari-kit On: May 25, 2004 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the fact of Ran being a small child he is so cut there really isnt that many plot holes and you have a good grasp on your au personality other ceap changing theres during the fic but you preitty stedy thank you for writing this fic and i hope you update agien soon
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you so have to finish this! I had a hard time tearing myaself from my computer to go to sleep and work today! Wow! i love the twists that you have thrown in! all of them are great, the family twists are the best! i never would have thought of Schawrz as a faimly before, not like i would Weiß and even then it took a bit! this is an awesome fic, and i hope to see more of it soon! Andee
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Reviewed By: jade_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeeeeeeeeee chibi aya!!! awwww he's so cute! i love this so far! i also like the brad/schu pairing ^_____^ i can hope you continue and have the next chapter out soon ^________________^
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Reviewed By: Amethyst_Sin On: February 12, 2004 17:23 CST
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Aww! Cute! Keep going, this is a really cute ficcu. ;p I got kudos, if you want some...
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Reviewed By: everyday_angel83 On: February 06, 2004 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read both the fic in fanfiction.net and mediaminer, you update faster in fanfiction.net is that right? anyways, i really love this stoy, a great insight into Farfie.i hope you update soon, pls email me when you have, if it's alright!!!keep up the good work!
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Title: shindoufan@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: shu-chan On: January 30, 2004 12:41 CST
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ok...i'm not that good in english, i'm more of a french-and-german speeking person... your german is , i am afraid not correct... the correct translation is the following one: "Ich kann euch nichts sagen" or, in a polite version: "Ich kann Ihnen nichts sagen" besides that, that was great! I furthermore apologies for any english mistakes that might be present, as i am only a fourteen-year-old girl... thank you for paying heed to these comments shu-chan
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Reviewed By: Horuseye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 05:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that you decided to put your story on this site as well. Your story is so creative and catching, I really like how you describe the people and their relationships. Aya is just so cute. And I just love Farfie! Hopefully there will be a new chapter up soon!
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