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Reviewed By: sharpieg On: July 15, 2004 14:36 CDT Comment/Review: I love love LOVE this story!!! Its such a switch from the norm, and a complete breath of fresh air. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Elena On: July 14, 2004 22:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love your story!!! everyday i check my mail just to check and see if u've updated it! i love the way u portray the story, and the description and the way that everything just ties together!
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Title: Bwahaha my first review Reviewed By: dark angel? On: July 07, 2004 00:25 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Alright..Kagome is going crazy and she should..but you need to update more!you're on summer break*Looks around*there's not that much to do and besides..I better still get to help edit when back in school*evil laugh*anyways..keep postin' these are great chapters even though a little short I know how hard it is to get a lot of good writing out sometimes.
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Title: hmmmmm... Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 02:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hmmmmm... this is very interesting, I must say. oh, I'll just say it, this is a great fic!! pleeeze, pleeeze, pleeeze update soon, VERY soon. By the way, it's spelled Kouga, not Koga. GET IT RIGHT!!! anyhoo... update! Update! UPDATE!!! do it now!! (or else, I'll make an extremely annoying screeching noise that could pass as singing in some strange countries...) *evil grin* he he he! *eyes turn dark red* I'll be coming for you if you dissappiont me... *crouches, ready to pounce* Muahahaha!!
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: July 03, 2004 00:07 CDT Comment/Review: hello! that was a great chapter! it was so funny! well i dont know what else to say but im glad you found time to update so soon. well i hope to read again soo! -ficfan-
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: June 28, 2004 12:40 CDT Comment/Review: oh wow! a chapter with my name in it! wow!*squel* well i was surprised to see an update so soon im so proud of you! yay!well its about time kagome spoke up about those animals! well i hope to see an update soon! -ficfan-
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: June 20, 2004 09:54 CDT Comment/Review: ok, so the long wait until the next chapter, but the're so short! is it worth the wait? well we'll see right? update when you can! -ficfan-
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Reviewed By: Salic On: June 15, 2004 01:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ruddy Brillant!!!!! update VERY soon please. I'm tittering on the edge of my seat here.
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: June 02, 2004 11:31 CDT Comment/Review: are you dead? UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: erinlin the random! On: June 01, 2004 18:19 CDT Comment/Review: This story's got the hot hot heat. *sigh * That was incredible. I look forward to reading more from you.
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Title: Feel special Reviewed By: erilin (not logged in) On: April 20, 2004 19:46 CDT Comment/Review: Feel special. Feel very, very special, because I h-a-t-e romance and the wild west, BUT, YET, I LOVE this story. This is a sign, either of the apocalypse or your mad story writing skills. I chose to believe the latter. *hugs*
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Reviewed By: lady le fay [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 00:05 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like your story. Kouga is my favorite character in the anime/manga. Kouga/Kagome pairings are my favourite. You're idea for a setting (Wild West) is an absolutely brilliant idea. Out of all the stories that I've thought of or have written, I have never come up with a story that is as brilliant as yours is. That just proves you have pure talent. Keep up the good work. Please update soon. :)
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Reviewed By: little rin On: March 09, 2004 00:08 CST Comment/Review: WHY haven't you updated yet? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: March 05, 2004 03:18 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: you are sooooooooo mean oh please update soon
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: February 26, 2004 00:12 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is one of the few fics that I've read that remind me of an actual romance book. The way you write seems like a professional. I look forward to reading more chapters *waves Kouga/Kagome flag*
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