| "The Journey Onward" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: Yep, another very long chapter!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 06:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write looooooooooong chapters, I don't have so much patience in them -_-' unluckily. But I know what ya mean, my MWord has to always check threw my writing, unluckily again, it is a German programm, it sometimes changes things wrong. But what I do really love in this chapter is the fight, long and clear on what has happened. Really good! I hope ya Update so soon again and if not, I will have to wait now don't I ^-^!!! Well, hope to see ya around soon and thanks for Updating so fast ^.^!!!
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Title: Hey! You are actually one of the best mate!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What much to say, good grammer, nearly no spelling mistakes, more then I could ever to in writing. ^.^! So your story interests me a hole lot, I like the style you are in. Slowly making sure everybody learns and are not the best from the very beginning. Very good, I would not have any patience for that! So I hope you have more fun in writing the story, it is like I mentioned really fabulous and cunning. Thumbs of for ya pal ^-^!
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Reviewed By: Shadowelf On: June 10, 2005 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another GREAT chapter, the interaction between characters and pokemon is superb.
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Title: Finally logged in
Reviewed By: Dacheran [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 20:56 CDT
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Oh... and I know I just reviewed, but I wanted to say I loved that inuendo scene with Krissy's hissy-fit and Kathryn's obliviousness. I actually burst out laughing and had to do a little happidance during it before I could settle down and continue reading. Anyways... yeah. Just wanted to say that. (also might be good to bring back those two rockets when you get back into that? if you weren't going to. A few reocurring characters tend to be better reads than lots of not, in my experience. But of course all of this is just my opinion...)
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Title: Yay! Nice...
Reviewed By: Dacheran(reallyshouldlogin) On: June 08, 2005 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Much better... although I wonder... are Krissy and Kathryn going to be an item, or did you just throw that in for humor? (hope just for humor personally... also hope for a reoccuring brandon. I'll let you put two and two together with those) Still... I liked the more variety that this chapter had, but you should be carefull not to overcompensate and not do enough with Kathryn. I don't think you had a problem here, but I can see how one might develope. (Sandshrew is awesome!) And the cliffhanger you ended on was very satisfying, in a way that only cliffhangers can be. Can't wait for the battle. (PS: Hope I wasn't the one that made you take a detour from what was up with the rockets... ^-^;; but it's nice to know I was influential.)
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Reviewed By: Formerly Glenn On: June 05, 2005 22:28 CDT
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It's kinda weird how she suddenly starts being able to understand all pokemon talk... she couldn't do that in the beginning... was that what that weird berry she ate did? In that case why hasn't she noticed?
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Reviewed By: Dacheran(notloggedin) On: June 05, 2005 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. It would be nice if Kath's friends did more, it makes it kinda boring to have her do everything and be omnipotent about everything pokemon. (exagerating) For instance, an early loss (like against that Brandon guy) would have made it a lot more appealing. And talking about a pokemon's "level" in such an organic environment is kinda weird also... Never the less, it's a good story. Think Krissy should have started with a Torchic though... as those evolve into a fire/fighting type... Ah well. You didn't really have that as an option. Maybe she should just train her Charmander in a modified TKD then...
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Reviewed By: Shadowelf On: May 18, 2005 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great, the interaction between pokemon and Kathryn and her friends are great. Shows the real interaction between Pokemon and Humans as partners working together. Not just battling each other while humans tell them what to do. Real feeling between human and pokemon
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya it me again, wow like the story! its becoming so good! oh please keep going! and this is still one of my fav. pok'e mon storys just to tell you! hehehehehe please tell us soon whey team rocket attaked her please its driving me nuts, realy^_^ c-ya till next time^_^ Sakota signing off for now!
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Title: DUDE!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Heather13 On: March 22, 2005 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Heather Sparrow once again! Lol. But seriously, you had me in the suspense in your Rocket kidnap, I'd really like some pointers on HOW to keep a story going without getting bored with it, cause that ends up happening to me so many times it's not funny. Oh, and could you PLEASE, pretty please with a cherry on top have Mewtwo appear, he's my favoritest Pokemon of ALL time!!! He rocks da house!!!! And again, great polt, fic, EVERYTHING!!! I also love your spelling. And I bet that Mewtwo will be a great assat, see I suck at spelling, to your team. Ja ne!!! ~ Heather Sparrow
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of my faveret Pok'e mon storys now its great, please update soon!
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Title: WOW!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie (not logged in and finally with time^-^) On: March 21, 2005 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never thought she would get kidnapped from Team Rocket! Maybe a fight with her friends, or winning the fight with Surfer, but not that!! You can really surprise a person with your writing ways, I really like that^-^! So I hope you continue your work and hang on out there, I usually dont find any time for my fan fics either (*sighes*) So UPDATE soooooooooooooon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Wes Jeffords On: March 19, 2005 03:59 CST
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I really like your fanfic, and how it has elements from both the anime and game. Your battle sequences are also very good, as I can imagine the pokemon battles easily. I do have one bad thing to say though....cliffhangers are just plain Evil! Please update as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: Chaos Owl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 08:30 CST
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I like! I wish their is a Venasaur in the stor..Or a Tyfloshion though...
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Title: i love it, keep going
Reviewed By: Baby_A [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love It !!!!!!!!!!!! it's great! you should write more cause it's getting really good! and i'm also a writer! i've got to say that you write like a pro! really good fic that you got! don't ever stop writing! gtg! Heather Sparrow
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