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Reviewed By: me On: March 08, 2004 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodness! I love your writing! I wish you would update more often.... Your fics are sooooooooo good! Please please please PLEASE update again soon...on all of your fics!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 00:03 CST
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Reviewed By: ~~*N*~~ On: February 21, 2004 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeeeeee! Arigato, Cherrie-san!! I am so very very happy that you have not only decided to continue with this lovely story but have also updated, and with such a good chapter!! Heero is so cute the way you write him...the whole flopping-on-the-bed-and-hiding-beneath-a-sheet thing was sooooooo super cute, but still quite Heero, methinks, because he was being antisocial. And I wanted to let you know that you write Trowa really well (not an easy thing to do), preserving all of his quiet grace. I am seriously excited to see where you will take this fic and the guys. I'm really curious to see what Duo-chan will be purchasing as a peace offering. I'm sorry I can't offer any real suggestions for Heero songs...all the stuff I listen to is a bit dark and/or sullen; I couldn't see Heero dancing around to it. I trust you to keep us safe from bubbly pop songs. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Backward On: February 21, 2004 16:54 CST
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weee another chappie yay!!! >glomps you< and its getting interesting!! Duo obviously likes heero and heero like's him to he's just being all mean cause he doesn't like his independance being taken away, which goes with his personality in the series. oo i have a song he could sing 'my december' by linkin park!! its one of there more pop-ish songs and about the only one that could be classified as ballad maybe and theres no screaming!! its a kinda sad one one of the lines is ' i'd give it all away just to have someone to come home to' i thought i't may fit the story, depending on how you develope heero's take on showbiz wether he's bitter about it or not. either way its a great song. and hehe i have a suggestion for a scene, but you can ignore me if you want to, heero having to practice some suggestive dance moves and duo getting all hot under the collar watching him >smirk< it think that could be quite funny. well carry on updating i will me waiting for the next chapters of all you fic >big grin
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Reviewed By: Princess2000204 On: February 20, 2004 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic so far, but I just don't see Heero singing those no-nonsense bubbly pop songs and especially from BRITTANY SPEARS!!! Heero just being plain Heero is more of the sullen music.
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Reviewed By: Princess2000204 On: February 20, 2004 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic so far, but I just don't see Heero singing those no-nonsense bubbly pop songs and especially from BRITTANY SPEARS!!! Heero just being plain Heero is more of the sullen music.
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Reviewed By: Yurako On: February 20, 2004 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story very much and hope you write more soon! I liked because all of it seemed to match the characters almost presicely. The character you didn't really match wasHeero, but I could see that you were working for the mood of the story of a pop artist. Nice job!! Please continue to write and one ? why was Heero singing Britany Spears? No offence meant but some songs form LikonPark could fit him too. I also wanted to mention I your Heero as being slightly bratty but not to bratty. One more thing is I think you should make Heero a little more smartalik and being able to give his death glares at Duo, for a laugh I mean. Please continue SOOOOONNNN!!!!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 07:37 CST
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Reviewed By: ~~*N*~~ On: January 28, 2004 00:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please do continue! It's really good and it has sooooo much happy potential!! (I, too, was a little frightened by the whole Britney song, but I survived.) And I LIKE Heero the way you've written him. To me, he just sounds slightly bitter about the whole being taken care of thing (which is very Heero, ne?). Anyway, please don't abandon this!
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Reviewed By: littlefox1227 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh! oh! i love it! i love it! OMG! heero was singing a brittany spears song! heeros arrogant, but i like him that way.^.- quatre was so cute when he fell of the bed. hehe. i can't wait for the pairings to really start showing. i love 1x2 and 3x4 fics. especially ones wheres theres both. you must update soon! you must! please?
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Reviewed By: KittyKatu On: January 21, 2004 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah!! Please, please, please continue!! This is the first time I've reviewed anything on mm.org, and it's just for you!! I love the plot! So cute! I really hope you update soon! I'll be waiting!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Backward On: January 21, 2004 14:24 CST
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WAIIIII soKEWL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 carry on please please please soon soon soon!!!!!! i wanna know how it all turns out!! but i will agree with the other reveiwer about the britany spears song, not one i would ever have imagined him singing but strangely now i can really see it suiting him. pleasepleasepleaseplease carry on soon !!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is not a flame: BUT WHY FOR THE LOVE OF GOD DOES HE HAVE TO BE SINGING BRITNEY SPRAERS OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OTHER THAN THAT ITS REALLY GOOD AND OF COURSE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KuraiMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 10:36 CST
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liked it? I LUVT IT! its a really good idea! and hey Heero didnt come over all THAT bratty i mean what do you have to expect from a star? anyhow u really SHOULD continiu! i luvt it!
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Reviewed By: Deee On: January 21, 2004 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OF COURSE YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE QUATRE X TROWA...SO SWEET!!!!! YOUR HEERO IS A LITTLE BRATTY...BUT IT'S ONLY THE BEGINNING RIGHT? MY...DUO AND WUFFIE ARE SEXY...I LOVED IT!!! PLEASE....WRITE WRITE!!!!! I'M REEEEAAAALY LOOKING FORWARD TO READ THE REST OF IT!!!!!
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