| "Rivers of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 03:03 CDT
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wow, i hope kikyo wants a divorce!! then it can be INU/KAG!!! muhahahaz i hope everything gets better! keep up the good work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 02:50 CDT
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Wow... you've got a whole lot going on here. I'm almost feeling as suffocated as your characters... um, don't take that the wrong way, it means you're doing a good job writing it, I'm just curious as all hell how/if you're going to drag any sort of a happy ending out of it!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 21:55 CDT
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Kikyou is a real stupid person, how could she just not tell Inuyasha that his child was killed he still has a right to know and then she's taking all of her pain out on him and he doesn't even know whats going on!!! There is just too much drama for me to be able to comment on it all, so please just update soon???
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Reviewed By: keelie On: March 31, 2004 05:27 CST
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I really, really like this fic. When are you going to update again? I'm dying to know what happens with Sango and Miroku. :-)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 02:09 CST
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AAAARRRRGGGGG I didn't even know the story had been updated, I thought I added this to my favorite list!!!!! Anyway, I can't believe Sesshoumaru did that to Rin and I why Rin can't just tell Sesshoumaru about what happened to her. If he really loves her he'll understand. And we have got to find a way for Kagome and Inuyasha to get together, this is killing me to see them avoid their feelings for each other, they can live without Kikyou but they can't live without each other. I can't wait to see happens when Sango tells Kagome and Inuyasha what happened to Miroku, I hope they help him. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lil_shortazz On: March 16, 2004 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grrrrrrrrrrrrr.....i dun care what u do inu gotta end up wid kagome!!!!! mayb kikyou should leave inu for naraku since u added him in the way you did thaT would b an interesting way for it to turn out...n have inuyasha catch her in the act and then mayb kagome can b there for him n they can b happi...that so sad how u were so mean to Rin in this story! oh well juss as long as it end up happi i b a very happi lil girl...i hope everyone end up happi but kikyou...plz cut kikyou off from inu soon i hate her!!!! inu n kagome belong together n i am one of those dumb fuck that believe that luv should alwayz win so dun shatter my hopez...*give a cute puppy dog face* plzziez dun do that newaz gotta to say i luv all five of ur story this might b the one i like least since the way it seem to look like it's gonna end up in heart break...i hate that...i want kagome to b happi i dun care if that bitch kikyou rought in hell for all i care...i hate her *growl* damn i unno y but she pisses me off juss tryin to steal inu all the time...well ok kagome is the one stealing him in this story but that doesn't matter she dun deserve him stupid inu y oh y do u keep ending up wid a bitch like that in ur life? newaz plz update all ur story if u can plz plz plz...they all so good n interesting plz plz plz plz plz plz *go on knees n beg* plz plz plz plz....newaz gotta tell u i luv ur storyz *cough* especially when inu n kag end up together *cough* luv Yen P/S plz keep on writing i think ur an mazing writer n hopefully will eventually become a famous author much luv oh n plz e-mail me at lil_shortazz@hotmail.com when u update something
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Title: Please Update!
Reviewed By: oddsbodikins [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lots of angst! But I still like it. I'm just wondering how (or even if) this is going to turn into a happy ending. :/
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Reviewed By: DivaLicious89 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great job on the lemon, i'll also review on fanfiction cuz i love reviewing!!!hehe anyways i thought the lemon was probably exactly what everybody looks for in a lemon, there was just enough emotion but you didn't just rush it and get it over, i like your lemon. Detailed but not 2 detailed...ugh i ahte those lemons that just drag on for 7 paragraphs about how they felt about each other....way 2 boring!Anyways if you really want to, you could add a little more detail, but other then that your on the right track!~Well g2g Lots of Love~DivaLicious89
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Reviewed By: [ArcaneFire] On: March 10, 2004 23:25 CST
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This story is great. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lainey On: March 09, 2004 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okie Dokie Pokie. I wuv all your fics!! Y'know the 9th/10th commandment is "Thou shalt not covet thy neighbors goods". Kikyo falls within that category so 'Gome-chan is breaking all the rules BUT in a constructive way! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: grlspider On: March 09, 2004 05:51 CST
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I can't believe you haven't gotten more reviews!!! This is such a great story! I love this affair thing you are doing with both Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru! It's so great and enticing.
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Title: romance with a plot
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I bet our hero's are in for so much more emotional pain before this one is done...I have idea's about what Kikyo is keeping from everyone, and if my favorite couple found out after they've given in...then I'm sure you'll have me ballin before the end. Ooh and I think that was a perfectly lovely lemon, I liked the words you used.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not signed on) On: March 09, 2004 03:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there that was very sad.. poor rin and sesshy. i think i cried. well keep up the good work. and update sooon Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why does it sound like Naraku is behind everything. Well Sess, Kagura and Rin and then I have a feeling that he had something to do with the fact that Kikyo can't have children. Which in turn is messing up her and Inuyasha's marriage which makes him turn to the one person that he truly loves. Despite what he says he really loves her. I don't know how any of this has anything to with Sango and Miroku. But you have to let some one find out what is going on and then some how stop so much heartache.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 20:51 CST
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SO MUCH DRAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe the conflict level of this story!!!!!!!! Why did you leave it hanging like that *bangs head against wall* How are you going to make a happy ending out of all this????? Poor Kagome, Poor Inu, Poor Rin, Poor Sango, Poor Miroku, and even Kikyou! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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