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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 20:45 EST
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I think I'm in love. Seriously. This story is so cool it's like it's own level of coolness. It's even to cool for that! I just got home from the worst day of school ever. I swear to god I'm not lying, it was horrible, but I'm in such a good mood now cuz I got to read your story ^_^ I hope you keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: Red_eyed_Rave [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 11:22 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You rock!!!!!!! This story is so different from other Sess/kag stories (in a good way). Please continue this fic, and update soon!! That was an evil part to end it at !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 21:19 EST
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I like, I like! I've only read the first chappie but u got it goin on!!!
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Reviewed By: DivaLicious89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 16:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great storee...ooooo cant wait for da next chappie!!!!I cant believe Inuyasha is sooo evil and mean in this storee>.
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Reviewed By: Pink Diana On: January 31, 2004 14:02 EST
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P.S. I forgot to put my e-mail address should you want to reply to my review its dianathevampiricmutant@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Pink Diana On: January 31, 2004 13:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though my first speculation from reading the summary was that it would be overly cliched, I found that the story was actually well done. Though it does have its moments when it is a little too lovey-dovey for my liking, it surpassed most of the myriad of Sess/Kag romances that litter the internet. One of the things I found was awkward in your story was: Her hair floated loose around her knees, silver and shining, a match for Sesshomaru's..." Because of the fact that Inu-yasha's and Sess's family is probably one that wouldn't have mated outside of its royal line, it would be unnatural that Kagome turned out looking like him. I found it, as a reader, disgruntling that you didn't come up with something a little more original. I feel and think that you could come up with something more along the lines of canine, but different. And having her hair grow out extremely long like that doesn't seem realistic. Her hair should be the same length. But what I did like about your story was how you kept Rin speaking in 3rd person, ("Rin will be very safe, Lady! Lord Sesshomaru said to leave Lady Kagome here, and go find Jakken to make him pick flowers with Rin! Goodbye, pretty Lady!") The story could use some changes, but those would only be smaller things, such as more detail in some places, like in the scroll room when Kags finds out that she is a demoness spelled to be human. In this spot you could clear up why she looks like Sess . Maybe saying that she will become a female version of the one who breaks the curse, or that she will look like the one she is meant to mate with. Or she could do something else. This part needs to be cleaned up, fix thoose loose ends. Nice story, enjoyed reading it.
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Title: keep going!
Reviewed By: makumba-chan (i am a real member of mm.org.. my computer just hates me right now) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 20:55 EST
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u must keep going!.. i mean... it's sesshomaru naked! who could ask for more?! it's like... a god... naked! there is still the fact that u need to show what she looks like... and the naked god and goddess. .... and revenge on inuyasha! .... and killing the clay pot! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i'm hyper right now! but keep going! onegai! ja ne!
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Title: bloodlust
Reviewed By: personlikeperson On: January 29, 2004 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautifully written! No Ocness that shouldn't have been there. virtually flawless. awesome job
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Reviewed By: Miyumi [not signed in] On: January 29, 2004 19:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the lemon! Very good and Sess/Kag fics are my absolute favorites!!! Keep up the great work and I can't wait until your next update!!! ~Miyumi
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Reviewed By: gg On: January 29, 2004 18:43 EST
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i really like you story but i was wondering why kagome was in pain.
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Title: Much like
Reviewed By: RavenPheonixFire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 02:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ack no keep going. Man I love this. This is one of the best stories I've read. Please continue. you're doing a great job.
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Reviewed By: moon of twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 01:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a very good story so hurry up and update
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: emerald dragon hanyou On: January 29, 2004 01:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool. like it. update soon alright? cant say much more or i'll have some mood swings and that can b dangerous. update soon, (again) c ya ~~*~~*EMERALD-
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 20:10 EST
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What an interesting story! I'll definitely keep reading this. I hope you'll update soon.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 21:10 EST
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oooo, yay I like this story. I hope somethign else developes ;) *locks hentia side in the closet and blushes* heehee....anyway, great writing!
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