Title: Uh...
Reviewed By: DJ-Takuya (not logged) On: November 29, 2005 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, you got a 4 in style for lack of the length of the duel. You didn't make any typos, so 10 there. You showed originality in the 3-on-1 duel, but they were Rare Hunters, so a 7. I liked it, though, so you got an 8 for enjoyment. And the 7 is what I thought the fic earned from all it's good qualities and it's bad. Your only problem is you don't seem to know the meaning of the word elaboration, you know what I mean? I liked it, and if all you're going for, then great. But if you plan to make a career out of writing then you've got a long way to go. Well, I hope this helped!
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