| "Through the Well" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 17:55 CDT
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OOOH That is so cool... But I kinda like an evil Kagome with an evil Naraku.. But I can't wait to see how you plan this one out.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 20:31 CDT
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this is a get fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 21:42 CDT
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this a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 17:33 CDT
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this a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Aitu ( yes.. still not signed in) On: May 24, 2004 02:06 CDT
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hello again. Just got done reading this new chapter.. ( or else why would I be reviewing? Well I guess knowing me who knows why, lol) But liked it too! That sucks about your computer geting all messed up. *gives it a get well soon card* Hopefully things work out! Adios
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Title: Making the rounds part 2--
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Helloooo- so i just got done saying "SHIT!!! I didn't review for this story.. what was I thinking??!?!?!?! *Yells* PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!!! I really liked it, honest, I even added it to my favorites list but it is beyond me why I did not review. *sniff* sorry =( Is shippo really dead? I really liked the scene where Naraku changed Kagome into that dark person. And I also liked that scene where the quote of your story summary comes from, and also the scene with the mint herbs, and okay, I better stop naming the scenes I like because then this review will be way too lenghty... Anyway, on to the next story!" After I wrote that my stupid laptop decided to goto a new page and erase what I had just wrote. Bad naughty computer! (okay, feel free to ignore me; I am in a goofy mood.)
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 17:12 CDT
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this is a very good fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: AlixMM On: May 08, 2004 23:57 CDT
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Great story but the last chapter Chapter Twenty: Kagome's transformation part two seems I dunno a bit 'choppy?' it seems like there are some words missing at the beginning of some sentences unless it is just my computer/browser. I tried to copy paste it into notepad to see if maybe it was but it came out the same I tried an alt browser and it still shows the same. This isn't a flame because this story is good I am just suggesting that you check the upload on the last chapter (20/1 pt2)
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(offline) On: May 01, 2004 18:04 CDT
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Huh? *blinks* what happened to Kagome?! Did Naraku do something to her? I didn't think she would do that to Inuyasha... poor little doggy.... lol anyways still luvin your fic!! update real soon!
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 12:59 CDT
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more, more, more, more, and one other thing MORE! update soon please!
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Title: te he!! i love it!!
Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyy,,, this kidd!! OMG i was reading through your review and i read this one ::: Reviewed By: blue moo On: March 08, 2004 14:08 EST Comment/Review: I hate seeing at the top of every chapter how updating 3 fics is a pain in the butt or the careless grammar errors you make. Speaking plainly, this story is nothing to get excited about. I am in fear that your other stories might be as boring as this one. Your characters are OOC. Your writing is almost like a 12 year olds. Do everyone a favor. Pay attention in English class and come back when you have something to offer the readers. Please. DAMN!! THAT GUY IS RUDE!! So fucking rude!! and he/she says that you write like a 12 year old.. well he should be talking cuz IMA 12 year old!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! damn.. and im canadian/asian too!!! that kid.. so damn extra. Anways. dunt listen to him. I bet he's jusss jelouse that HE can't write a good story. Pfh... anyways.. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! you're one of my fave auhtors and i LOVE all your stories!!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update dude!!
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Title: Good Story!!
Reviewed By: Phantomangel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh this story is soooooo good!! But why did you have to kill off Shippo? I love Shippo! I've read all your stories and so far I think this is the best one besides "Will you be mine?" !! I just thought I would let ou know my thoughts!! Please update soon (^_^) Please read my stories: Midnight Stalker- 12 chapters complete The Book of Lies- working on chapter three Phantomangel17
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashafan On: April 18, 2004 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story it's my abloute fav hurry up and write more or i'll explode!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 19:12 CDT
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Great story review soon! Oh if sango and miroku already know that theres something going around controlling their bodies why did'nt they bring it up in front of inuyasha and the rest of them??? It would have made perfect sense to tell everyone.
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