| "Through the Well" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: AlixMM On: May 08, 2004 23:57 CDT
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Great story but the last chapter Chapter Twenty: Kagome's transformation part two seems I dunno a bit 'choppy?' it seems like there are some words missing at the beginning of some sentences unless it is just my computer/browser. I tried to copy paste it into notepad to see if maybe it was but it came out the same I tried an alt browser and it still shows the same. This isn't a flame because this story is good I am just suggesting that you check the upload on the last chapter (20/1 pt2)
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(offline) On: May 01, 2004 18:04 CDT
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Huh? *blinks* what happened to Kagome?! Did Naraku do something to her? I didn't think she would do that to Inuyasha... poor little doggy.... lol anyways still luvin your fic!! update real soon!
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 12:59 CDT
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more, more, more, more, and one other thing MORE! update soon please!
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Title: te he!! i love it!!
Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyy,,, this kidd!! OMG i was reading through your review and i read this one ::: Reviewed By: blue moo On: March 08, 2004 14:08 EST Comment/Review: I hate seeing at the top of every chapter how updating 3 fics is a pain in the butt or the careless grammar errors you make. Speaking plainly, this story is nothing to get excited about. I am in fear that your other stories might be as boring as this one. Your characters are OOC. Your writing is almost like a 12 year olds. Do everyone a favor. Pay attention in English class and come back when you have something to offer the readers. Please. DAMN!! THAT GUY IS RUDE!! So fucking rude!! and he/she says that you write like a 12 year old.. well he should be talking cuz IMA 12 year old!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! damn.. and im canadian/asian too!!! that kid.. so damn extra. Anways. dunt listen to him. I bet he's jusss jelouse that HE can't write a good story. Pfh... anyways.. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! you're one of my fave auhtors and i LOVE all your stories!!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update dude!!
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Title: Good Story!!
Reviewed By: Phantomangel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh this story is soooooo good!! But why did you have to kill off Shippo? I love Shippo! I've read all your stories and so far I think this is the best one besides "Will you be mine?" !! I just thought I would let ou know my thoughts!! Please update soon (^_^) Please read my stories: Midnight Stalker- 12 chapters complete The Book of Lies- working on chapter three Phantomangel17
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashafan On: April 18, 2004 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story it's my abloute fav hurry up and write more or i'll explode!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 19:12 CDT
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Great story review soon! Oh if sango and miroku already know that theres something going around controlling their bodies why did'nt they bring it up in front of inuyasha and the rest of them??? It would have made perfect sense to tell everyone.
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Title: Stardust19@insightbb.com
Reviewed By: AnniGurl79 On: April 08, 2004 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fanfic so far...keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: MwAhAhAhA On: March 26, 2004 21:15 CST
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I suck at typing right! BLAME MY MOM!!! Ahem..I mean...kidding >.< Well yeah, you probably know what I meant back there! Hopefully....>.< and again...UPDATE!! PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!
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Reviewed By: MwAhAhAhA On: March 26, 2004 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahem..hi! Don't listen to ppl who say that ur story sux! Cuz it doesn't!! O btw...back there i said"plz...revie..." i think and so i jsut wanted to say it meant plz update >.< lolz,yeah! I didn't ahve sugar today...sio i'm not as hyper as I'd like to be....BYEEEEEEEE!!! Update soon!! *eats the cookie she handed out to everybody* I'M HYPER!! But...now I have to go >.< Tah-TaZ!
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Reviewed By: sesshoumaru_lover200 On: March 26, 2004 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your work is really good to me and btw.....i hate you more then i despises you...but you do good shippo:keep wrighting pweesssss.... you heard the boy ~*huggles shippo to death*~
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 08:58 CST
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1st: Your writing doesn't "suck" it's quite good actually. 2nd: I didn't mean to make you feel bad about it... it's just a pet peev. 3rd: Thank you for the cookie! ^_^
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Reviewed By: MwAhAhAhA On: March 25, 2004 20:14 CST
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Hey againnnnnnnnnnn....what kind of a place is that to stop!!! AHHHH I know your trying to kill me!! I JUST KNOW IT!! Ahem...I still didn't recieve that cookie i asked for! Lolz jkin! Plz hurry up and write a new chappieeeeeee ^.^ Umm...for now I don't have any guesses..well i do but i'll keep it to myself! Teheheheehehehe...*Keeps on going with her giggles for hours after hour when finally....* OMG!!!!! SHE'S GONNA KILLL HIMMMMMMM!!! NOOO HE'S MINE!! *goes crazi* Ahem..i'll leave you alone now....review....plz...hurry....*eye twitches* he's gonna dieeeeeeee *faints*
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 23:39 CST
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*sigh* I really hate it when writers try to black-mail us into reviewing. It just seems underhanded to me.... For arguments' sake my guess is that IY gets so upset that he goes and grabs Kaede-bachan and wisks her back to Kag since he can't move her. There, happy now? *I feel so cheap*
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