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Reviewed By: Stusokei Wolf Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i do love this ^_^ but you sped up too fast, so fast to be honest, that you geve me a headeach...so i'll continue it tomarrow, i don't think it was realy you who gave me the headeach, but atemting to study a milion things at once and having writer's block on most of my stories. but i truly did enjoy this and the only flaming commenti i have is, you where a little off charecter in some parts but it made it funny, and you spelled kikiyo right for the american vertion, but why so nice? you with the entier nece kikiyo thing, it's just creepy and i think that's about it. say have you published this on Fanfic.net i think a lot of people would like it there if you haven't sent it already.
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Reviewed By: demon mira [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed alomst everything about this story so far. exept for the whole Kagome going back to Inuyasha thing. if he had ever done that to me i would have given him a very nice little threat i use every so often on guys to see them squirm. Well please write another chapter soon. see ya latter
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Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 16:42 CDT
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Absulutely loved it! is it over? u didn't ezactly say, or did u :P i cant remember. awesome work!
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Reviewed By: Reynna On: August 26, 2005 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Flames are so funny...anyway, its a shame that there isnt many DracoKagome fics out there. I think this is awesome, but youre rushing things a bit. Like make stops in between some sentences when someone is yelling. Like what Kagome said to Draco about mix-breeds, that was too long and maybe you should explain things more, add in little details that make things easier to picture. But this is not a flame, just constructive critisism...or however thats spelt! But this story is too good to be flamed!
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Title: heart of ice
Reviewed By: cute but psycho girl On: May 05, 2005 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the first harry potter/inuyasha crossover ive ever read. and its extreamly good. plz plz plz update soon its sooooo good. :) :) :) :)
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuch-Ookami On: February 16, 2005 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. Is that all or is there going to be more. If there is please update soon. I think you went a little too fast though. But you had alot of chapters which I like so that's okay. This was also my first time read ing a crosover of Inuyasha and Hary Potter. I think I will keep reading these types of stories as well the others that I like.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 00:44 CST
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Ok, this is going to be a bitter-sweet review, so take what i say with a grain of salt. First of all, i have to say that you have the potential to be a great writer. there are moments when you show great descriptive ability, and you obviously have the creativity. Readers who are hard-core agains OOCness will probably hate your story, but i have learned to just go with it, so no complaints there. Overall, i think your fic is very good, showing a side of draco i wouldn't have thought to look for. One criticism i do have to make though, actually has nothing to do with your writing. The way you are handling flames makes me wonder just how old you are. I'm not saying it's right to attack someone's story w/out a legitimate reason, but i have read some of these flames, and they really don't seem to have been written by overly intelligent reviewers. My advice is to simply ignore the stupid ones and avoid dignifying them with responses in your chapters. It makes you look sound like a catty pre-pubescent (no offence if you are in the 10-13 age range) and gives the flamers legitimancy. Hm. i don't want to end this on a bad note, so i'll finish by wishing you luck with plot ideas for the rest of this ficcy, and may your choice of a higher power grant you patience to deal with uneducated critisism. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Kappa-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You're story is awsome! It's so original with the Draco/Kagome pairing. =P
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Title: heart of ice
Reviewed By: siriuslykickass On: June 22, 2004 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant belive you your horrible lupin may not be the best looking but im sure he looks better than you! sirius is the greatest man in the world your should be kissing his feet oh no wait your not worthy enough to look at the man! how dare you insult suck greatness! harry potter is the greatest thing that has ever come of the literary world. with the crap that you have writen you should be locked up and never be aloud to see day- light. your story is such filth that i wouldnt even deem it good enough to wipe my butt with. you should be ashamed of yourself and uterly embarassed that you ever even attempted to write anything much less the garbage you have! i cant belive you would write about a good character being kagome and saying she is in sytherin! i dont like anime but how dare you! i would have been somewhat nice and put the poor girl in hufflepuff. i cant stay away from this so i'll go back into it, sirius is sooo awsome how dare you write anything remotly offensive about the man! i dont know if you know but the great man is dead and you trashed him as if he was some ordinary common filth, like yourself. and another thing i cant belive you dare speek of remus john lupin with a filthy mouth, the poor man is in a hard time because all of his friends around him are dieing,and you speek about his looks you speek about the one thing that has no importance what so ever but still matters and you trash it?! i hope my words have enlightend you and next time you write or even think
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Reviewed By: mayqua On: May 19, 2004 06:06 CDT
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Florish and Blotts-book store Honeydukes-candy store
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Reviewed By: I won't tell On: May 17, 2004 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh so it just appesred? Cool. Um.. yah later!
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Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 20:49 CDT
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please update soon! i'm dying from the suspense!!!update pleeze?!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 13:44 CDT
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ooooohhhhhhh!!!!!! do they get back together?? update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY! Pansy gets put in her place! I'm soooo sick of her! We just need to kill her off! Yeah! Kill Pansy! oh.... and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Grrr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 04:06 CDT
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ok, i kno i complimented u before, but the new chapters are absolutely amazing! PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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