| "Letters of Love:A Beast Boy and Raven Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: MD On: April 04, 2005 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fic and hentai story ever! I loved it! You've got a real talent. I hope you make another r/bb one. Not with anyone else just them. Keep writing dude!
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Reviewed By: Daur Bleu On: February 04, 2005 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One problem...what about cyborg? Is he destined to jack off for the rest of his life?
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Title: Thank God For Me Living And Reading This Awesome Fic!
Reviewed By: bone khan On: October 21, 2004 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! I ALWAYS LIKE BB / RAVEN ROMANCE (why do I have my CAPS on?) and absolutly thought the lemon was awesome! Being a twelve year old TT writer, I greatly admire your work. Keep Writing Man!
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Title: KING OF LEMONS!
Reviewed By: Spyder 33 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You truly are king of lemons!...No doubt about it. Hey man keep on writing these lemons and I hope you stay king of lemons. I must admit that you are a good writer...And you should definintley make that fic on Robin/Starfire and BeastBoy/Raven sex competition! I'll be waiting I'm out!
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Title: Coolness....yeah....coolness
Reviewed By: Biggnasty On: July 02, 2004 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice comedy sense like i said before. And i like those cut-ins that you always do, really funny. That's what makes em good. Although a serious hentai story is good, it's always great to have 14-year old comedy too:) keep em comning
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Title: Biggnasty
Reviewed By: Fav baby fav On: June 30, 2004 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All these reviews are in the same night. and im not a big fan of terra. she really isnt the best in show if you know what i mean. and look at her nostrils....ok ill stop. Anyways this one is really good. And Raven/Star rules. Arrgh damn samusaran she or he has already seem a raven/star fic. hmmm wonder if i can chat with her over this whenver she gets back on.( very unlikely) i bet u would make a great raven/star lemon. and....oh there it goes....yep my brain stopped working...damn i forgot what i was gonna say. well anyways see ya. this is my last one for the night.
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Reviewed By: mackattack On: June 22, 2004 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I...you...b..b..but...she...and...nevermind that was one of the greatest love stories I have ever read! It was funny, it was sad, and it was romantic! Please you HAVE to make more of those!!!!!!! PLEASE!! Anyways I'm off to read "My Special Star" and the other ones that you have made and hopefully they're as good as this one so bye for now! Oh I almost forgot! If your fourteen and your making these kind of fan fics, then....oh screw it I'm reading these and I'm only thirteen then you sould keep makin them! Later!
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Reviewed By: mackattack On: June 22, 2004 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I...you...b..b..but...she...and...nevermind that was one of the greatest love stories I have ever read! It was funny, it was sad, and it was romantic! Please you HAVE to make more of those!!!!!!! PLEASE!! Anyways I'm off to read "My Special Star" and the other ones that you have made and hopefully they're as good as this one so bye for now! Oh I almost forgot! If your fourteen and your making these kind of fan fics, then....oh screw it I'm reading these and I'm only thirteen then you sould keep makin them! Later!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Shadow's Light On: May 12, 2004 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a pretty good fic. I think some of your other ones were better. Like the RobinxTerra thing. W/e. Anyway, for the next part you could either fix someone up with Cyborg or you could do maybe Terra and Speedy. Or maybe Aqualad. I'm just giving suggestions. Goodjob.
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Title: You sir, Deserve a cookie
Reviewed By: Skullknightx01x [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the pairing of Raven and Beastboy after all he does try to get at Raven everytime in the Series. Its great to see the underdog score the hot goth chick. Keep writing. Skullknight
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Reviewed By: HSA2 On: April 29, 2004 17:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well dude your in luck cuz I got a hopefully awesome SF/Ra/T I plan to write. I call it "Team Venus' Night In" and its about SF, Ra, and T practicing sexual positions on each other
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Reviewed By: Titian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read several of you other fanfics and have enjoyed you writing. Your use of Language and imagination are astonding. now i a little question burning in the back of my mind do you think you could write a hentai story with Raven Starfire and Terra? it is simply a request and a kind of challenge are you up to it? Later TITAn
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Reviewed By: SamusAran of SR388 On: March 16, 2004 06:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT???? ur only 14?!?! Good Boy...u've made a 15yr old "pre-cum" 3 times. Do more. Need any ideas? How 'bout: robin/raven, starfire/beastboy(dude), cyborg/starfire, cyborg/raven (I never read a fic with those combos), raven/star (i've read 3 of those), robin/bb? GOOD LUCK.
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Title: Lmao
Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the bestlemons I read it had plot and I laughed till I was crying and I even cried with beastboy I mean beast Dude I loved your story
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Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now THAT my freind IS how you write a lemon,well a citrus Now all we need is some Real hardcore Porn!!!!!!! J/k Megsy's been a naughty boy and swiped a few beer energons loved it GET READY SWCREW EATCH OTHER INTO SUBMITION!!!!!!!/i>
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