"Can't Help Myself:A Robin and Starfire Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: AWSOME AS FUCK Reviewed By: DrJ613 On: April 19, 2004 17:40 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was a great story all I found was 1 or 2 grammer errors but no one is perfect and I was looking for a fic just like this MORE P.S. always insert detailed oral it makes a good lemon better Oral = Blowjob :)
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Title: good Reviewed By: Kitsune-rose On: April 12, 2004 18:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: I like the story. But you need to calm all that mess down about people flaming you. People have every right to critisize what they do and do not like. So shut up!!!! Besides that, good job.
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Reviewed By: Showstopper (too lazy to sign in On: April 05, 2004 15:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review: First off, Robin would never mess with Starfire like that despite his urges to be with her because it's an invasion of her privacy to go into her room and do the things he did to her. It's tantamount to rape. You do have potential, I suggest you keep your sexual fantasies out of the fic with the narration. Have a good day, :)
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Reviewed By: Still haven't found me On: April 05, 2004 00:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh, you sure showed me. Oh, God, you can't be serious, right? You're going to be a pro-wrestler? And you're HAPPY about it? Do me the biggest of all favors and pull an Owen Hart on us. Only try to do it vertically.
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Title: Whatever Reviewed By: HSA2 On: April 04, 2004 17:12 CDT Comment/Review: Dude, you can quit trying cuz no matter what you say or do I'm not gonna stop writeing. This is as much my passion as becoming a professional wrestler and no one, not even dickweeds like you can stop me.
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Title: I'll bet not Reviewed By: Found me yet? On: April 04, 2004 00:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: Once again, you've managed to completely embarrass yourself. Again, horrific spelling. Grammar, still bad. Poorly put together, your ego once again manages to outshine its boundaries...you're as low as they get. Lines such as "sweet I always wanted to do 69" and "and I thought only I and Sonic the Hedgehog could achieve that kind of speed." My god, you're sickeningly full of yourself! You see, this is why I hate you! If you could deflate your head even a little, I would let you get away with it! Instead, you decide to be conceited enough to literally make me sick! I'm actually feeling queasy at this moment! I'm very aware that Striker gave away a few details. Pity...he was to be your next clue anyway. At least it got done faster that way. Well...you still haven't found me? What are you waiting for? I've already invited you. Now then...come find me, HyperSonicAsshole2.
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Reviewed By: YamiYaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 02:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Interresting....
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Title: Great Fic Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 17:00 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Veryy good firts one of your stories I read and just like to say it was the best I've read in a long time and I even told my friend to review but they aren't done reading it yet good story
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