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| "Returning Home" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 21:09 CDT
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this is a great great fanfic please update soon
| Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 01:29 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
| Reviewed By: trinity757575@yahoo.com On: June 09, 2004 22:49 CDT
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KUDOS!!! you have defently out done yourself on this chapter!! to bad inuyasha is all hung up on her being a kitsune, though he was pretty into her sent.^.~ and thats another thing that really sealed it for me, the way you described inuyasha's and kagome's sents, you are the FIRST person who in my oppion who really captured the essence or (scent) of what i really think inuyasha and kagome smell like, especially inuyasha, you did a wonderful, beautiful, awesome job with this chapter!!!hehe im just so giddy. i dont know how to put it into words!O.O!!hehe. i just hope inuyasha gets over his little hang up with kagome being a kitsune,(BAD inuyasha,BAD)LOL^.~ this chapter was fun!!!so dont worry, i just wish it was alitte longer. i didnt want it to end!! cant wait for the next chapter!! GOMO ARIGATO, TAIL WAGGER-SAMA!!^.^ trinity
| Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 20:32 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
| Reviewed By: trinity757575@yahoo.com On: June 08, 2004 00:10 CDT
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Kagome dead? mmmmmmmm...i thought she was in suspened animation? at lest thats what i hope!lol. and you defently got me curious about shippo looking for his sister, but she wont be able to see him..mmmm. and this unkown miko is quiet the mystery. yeup..you defently have my attention, and my curiousity is defentely up and you know that saying about curiousity killed the cat but satisfaction brought him back.;) cant wait for the next chapter to find out what happens next.MEOW!!LOL.trinity.
| Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 22:10 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
| Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 17:37 CDT
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wow. that really does suck...kagome just died. perhaps not for long, or perhaps for the rest of eternity. i shall just have to wait until you update to find out what the truth is. although it will deffinitely be welcome to learn what prompted the girl to do that. and congrats on the other reviewees. farewell for now.
| Reviewed By: trinity757575@yahoo.com On: June 02, 2004 16:34 CDT
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sorry i havent reviewed before, but i just finished reading the first story that went with this story, and i got to say you've got me hooked. i hope you continue with the story, i think your doing a wonderful job, so PLEASE dont stop. you've got my trying to guess whats gonna happen next, with the angst, funny momnets, and wondering if inuyasha and kagome will get together (im hoping they will!=p) keeps me checking my mail daily. so i say thankyou and please keep writing. trinity
| Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 20:46 CDT
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omg omg omg mannnnnnnn she is dead this is a very very very great fanfic please update soon
| Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 22:03 CDT
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this a great fanfic please update soon
| Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 16:56 CDT
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It would seem that some interesting changes are about to occur in kagome in inuyasha's current relationship...wonder what inuyasha has planned for kagome. Mary Jane is a very interesting character, and im very curious about who this new character will be. dont really know what will be done about...cant remember her name, oh well. have fun
| Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 18:40 CDT
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please update sooon
| Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 16:53 CDT
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very nice songs, they were very, very well done. too bad, i was fairly far off. That bit of mythology that you added was very enjoyable, very much like most myths that ive heard of. although i do wonder about what could cause a race to loose their color...must have been something nearly amounting to the destruction of the planet. :) i wonder if the voices in Marys head are good or bad...i think that the voices might be their ancestors, or the dog/wolf people. thanks much for the update, and good luck with the rest...it would seem that things are getting a bit more involved now. thanks for the mystery to contemplate till the next chap. till then, have fun
| Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 02:38 CST
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heh, thanks...i actually kinda thought about it a bit later, and didnt think it was all that good myself. sorry about that. interesting girl, although its wierd that she never introduces herself. i was just thinking, and it occured to me that this girl might be looking for sorrel, and came from a city of other similar people. but she would probably give off some form of energy other than human if she did. although if its true for whatever reason it would explain kagome following her, since she might sense another like her...at least subconsciously. i actually kinda like that theory, but i dont know. now im very curious about who she is. oh well, update when next you can. and good luck with the rest.
| Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 00:57 CST
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just for the hell of it, i went over this chap with a fairly critical eye...more or less to see why you called it bad, and to see if i could actually give a good review. some problems that i noticed were a lack of detail, and some lack of continuety. ummm...i think the ending could use some work too, seems a bit bland, not really finished, but not really suggestive of more to come. thats all the criticism i could find...it wasnt a bad chapter since you have a storyline that your following. no spelling mistakes that i could see. and what i must say is one of your greatest accomplishments...updating when you only have one reviewer. *nods* that wasnt too bad. feel sorry that no one else wishes to impart their bit of wisdom, although its not always wisdom that they give. and a mere suggestion...dont update until your ready, if you just update for my sake (hopefully not), then dont worry about updating until you feel that the chap is good. have patience, and more people will come...they usually do if there is more to read, so keep at it. good luck, and i hope you find peace in every action you may take. :)
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