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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok...so reviews are what wake up your muses...Ok muses, I still love this story, I still hang on the edge of my seat each day hoping to see that "NEW CHAPTER ADDED" notice in my email box...I hope I get to see it again soon.
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Title: you are forgiven
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 21:10 CST
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yayyy kagome is bac and pluse she is a powerful miko/kitsune/hanyou isnt that great yayy love your story up date soon is sorrell and mary jane related or friends or somthing and how long is inuyasha goin to be human is kagome and inuyasha going tyo end up together or is she goin to run off with the akira guy or maybe evan FLUFFY **hint*hint* Kagome *cough*and*cough*Fluffy*cough*fluff*cough cough* oh no i getin a cold maybe we need to read in between the lines _-lol-_
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Title: FREEZE***
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 19:08 CST
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ok hold up rewind and pause turn up the vol. and listen closely YOU CAN NOT KILL KAGOME YOU WOULDNT YOU COULDNT WOULD YOU YOU MUST LET HER LIVE OK GOT THAT!!!! ok here is your second chance im going to rewind and you can save kagome ok *rewinding**stop!* there you go a second chane love your story and continue the good work bring kagome bac or im going to eject you *smiles kindly* your life is in my remote-controll
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I have to go back and re-read the last chapter. I'm so happy to see the muses have stayed with you for a while, I can't wait for more.
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Title: Perfecto
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a perfect chapter. I like how it ended, I'm sure it's bound to keep this story in their minds until you next get a chance to update. Which I hope isn't as long, but I will still come back if it is.
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 20:40 CDT
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This is a really cute story and I love Kagome as a kitsune. Her tail is so cute and playing pup games with Inuyasha is adorable. Please don't give up on your stories. Please update soon
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Title: *weeping softly*
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 04:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this might sound weird but I love you...or rather your writting style and you story idea's. And I love where this one in particular went. From dramatic and kind of sad to cute and really really fun. I can't tell you how many times you made me smile in the later half of this story. I was getting so sad as I got closer to the last chapter posted because I could see that you havn't update most of you stories in almost a year, and I just didn't want to stop reading. I wanted to read about more of hanyou Kagome's funny playful side and I really just loved that playfullness of it all. I hope your muse tickles your brain soon and we all get to read some more from you...oooh and by the way your on my fav authors list so I'll know when you update anything here. Ja oh and just to appease my otaku soul buzo=bozu youkia=youkai and finally Under the Bridge is by The Red Hot Chilie Peppers, please forgive my dorkiness I've been waiting to say that sense I first read Oops. I'm off to read some more of you posted works
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 24, 2005 08:01 CDT
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Thank you for the great chapter (chapters for me actually). I missed the notification for your last chapter even though you're on my favorite authors list. The message must have come in mixed with a bunch of spam and got missed. Double treat for me. Two new chapters. Woo hoo. My favorite part are, of course, the fluffy bits where Kagome gets Inuyasha all flustered. She's a terrible tease and is going to drive our poor Inuhanyou absolutely insane. I'm enjoying watching the evolution of their relationship and am looking forward to the next update. Thanks for sharing your work!
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 02:22 CDT
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Its kinda interesting how fate (or maybe its just destiny) seems to be drawing kagome and inuyasha to each other...slowly making them into equals. Although i have become a bit curious as to why kagome hasnt used the subduing spell...only ideas i have are that she either becomes too emotional and just lashes out without thought whenever he might deserve it, or (as unlikely as it seems) she feels the need, on some level of consciousness, to attempt beating him without the aid of magic. oh well, some answers will only be found when they find you. update soon please, im curious what the combat will be like. good luck ^^
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 03:29 CDT
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hehehe good story up till now. Kagome's change was an extremely surprising change of pace. i was expecting something, although being transformed into a kitsune was certainly unexpected. She certainly seems to be adjusting fairly well to the change. All the additional energy and senses is deffinately creating a rather amusing change in personality that is more of a positive way of acting. lol she deffinately acts in a more playful manner than before. I guess that kitsune was a good choice for her new race. Now I'm just curious as to how she acts during a more...intense fight. That would probably prove to be rather interesting. Sorry for not reviewing any sooner, but some outside circumstances prevented me from even reading the rest of the story til now. good luck with the rest ^^
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: ChrisKaz958 On: April 17, 2005 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a really original story! I love it! Sorry i don't review every chapter but i tend to read the whole thing and then comment on it. I really like how you described the smell of Kagome and Inuyasha. Its really funny how Inuyasha has to teach Kagome hunting! I was wondering when you could have a bad guy or enemy they could fight? And does Kagome even sense the jewel shards anymore? What are they doing now? Looking for Sorell or Naraku or jewel shards? And now that Kagome is hanyou kitsune, will she even used her bow anymore or is she gonna use her claws like Inuyasha does? By the way, i really like the twist of Kagome becoming a hanyou kitsune. It was really unexpected and i look forward to reading hoe this will affect Kagome's and Inuyasha's relationship. For Kagome fighting, i have no idea what you have in store, but it would be cool if she got into trouble and Inuyasha wasn't able to help her in time, and she saved herself with her new claws/powers. It would help clear up the thinking that Kagome can't do anything herself and that she always needs Inuyahsa to save her and rescue her. It would show she could fend for herself. Anyway, just a thought. I'm sure whatever you do will be great! I really love this story and all the background info you provide. It makes the story more real and believable of the characters. Excellent story and i look forward to reading the rest! Please update soon! I really love your work! ChrisKaz958
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: March 06, 2005 23:32 CST
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Sorry I neglected to review last chapter. My bad. You're right, you put so much effort into your writing, I should at least take the time to tell you how much I appreciate it. You are one of my favorite authors and I have enjoyed all your work. That being said, I loved this chapter. I am really enjoying Inuyasha's attraction to Kagome. I hope he eventually gets enough courage to let her know how much he likes her. I'm a huge fluff fan. I enjoyed the wrestle match and Kagome's ultimate strategy to get the jacket. Thanks for writing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 14:07 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please updadte soon
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 21:09 CDT
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this is a great great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 01:29 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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