| "Watch Me As I Fade Away" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Red Queen On: March 24, 2006 11:56 CST
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i just re-read this. ken's so funny; i love his inner monologues. is it still gonna be kenxran? i hope so. i might've mentioned liking that pairing. i LOVE granola!farf x aya-chan. poor, poor samurai yotan! *sniffle* this is such a cool story -- shit. my mom just walked in and accused me of doing something i didn't do, so now i'm all pissed. pissed pissed pissed. anyway, great story, i'm glad you're thinking about considering writing the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Schmetterling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I LOVE it . I love it , i love it ,i love it . I want to hug and cuddle this fic. Thank you so much for writing it . ^__^
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Reviewed By: malcious_lufoy On: January 17, 2006 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooo...you have to keep writing this...I reeeaaaallly need to find out what happens to Ken and if he ever gets back! And I freakin' love Farfarello! Please, write another chapter and I will rejoyce!
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Reviewed By: K . K On: August 15, 2005 03:40 CDT
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I absolutely adore this fic ! Love the poor outcast yotan . Overall this story has been a very interesting read . Your writing style flows smoothly and the plot is very original . I will anxiously ( if not impatiently ) await your next update . Can't wait to see what happens next with the whole un-insane Jei thing . I usually don't like Sci-fi but you made made me like this !! I think you must be some undercover brainwasher or something .@_@ Keep up the good work !
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Reviewed By: Andartha On: April 19, 2005 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some really wonderful ideas in the "what if" department. I especially enjoyed the concept of a closed off Japan and a Jei who's still into religion, but in a totally different way. Good characterization too. Thank you very, very much. I spent an encredibly enjoyable hour reading your story.
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Reviewed By: ITSAME On: January 26, 2005 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god, I love this fic! It's so original and freaky. And that chapter with the Totoro song was also creepy. The lyrics seemed to fit..in some strange way. Ahh! But I want to know what happens to Kenken! I hope he can get back home! Oh yes..and hippie Farfarello =
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Reviewed By: Alchemist On: September 12, 2004 10:35 CDT
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I love the story so far and hope that you continue it, please. Parrellel dimnsion stories are always fun (Check out Eli by Bill Myers for a cool version of what the world would have been like if Christ didn't come until the 21st century--feeding the crowd of 5,000 with a happy meal anyone?-- but I hvaen't seen it done in the WK universe yet... Great job!
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Reviewed By: allis [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all I have to say: UPDATE SOON! this is great *bows*
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Reviewed By: lazy bum On: August 23, 2004 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, please tell me you have more to update with soon! Plea~se! i love this story! and this is a particularly twisted reality! i know i might be asking for a lot, but i hope you update again soon! Miko no Tears and Aya, a lazy mediaminer member
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Title: this should have more reviews
Reviewed By: rosanna On: August 21, 2004 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should update this fanfic soon. You have a way of writing that keeps a person entertained and interested. I defenitely like it so far. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS ONE SOON! ths is fantastic! the twists and turns are great! looking forward to the next chapter! Miko no Tears and Aya
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Title: Why does this not have more reviews?
Reviewed By: RurouniTriv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 01:14 CDT
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Cool idea, great presentation - it explains by showing rather than just telling. And poor, poor bewildered KenKen, he's just getting more and more boggled all the time. Poor lonely Yohji, though. Pity he couldn't come along. :(
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Reviewed By: wannabeinanime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 16:53 CDT
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Ack! No fair leaving with that kind of a cliffhanger. Love this story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: melaniehibiki@yahoo.de
Reviewed By: melaniesoong [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 05:54 CDT
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Waaaahhh, this is soooo good ^_^ I was alternately laughing and frozen with suspense. And that cliffhanger was just evil. I feel so bad for the poor, unpopular Yohji, though, I wish he'd made it through with Ken. Anyway, i love the way you write, this Ken's point-of-view is funny, refreshing and never boring. Please update this soon! I'll add this fic and you to my favorites so I won't miss it if you do. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tsukiori Kira [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 09:35 CDT
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I like the way this AU idea has been worked out. am wiating for the YoKen. Hope you will update soon
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