| "A Life I Deserve" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: eyecandy On: April 22, 2004 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good stuff. Keep writing it. Can't wait 2 see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: ZenZenZen On: April 07, 2004 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady On: March 19, 2004 20:11 CST
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Awww! Thanks for sharing, its fun to read!
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Reviewed By: Fluffys_Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to continue! That's so cute! ^_^
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Reviewed By: morgansgirl23 On: March 09, 2004 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far! Please continue to write more, I can't wait for the lemony part!! Also, will there be a Van Jr. in the near future?? Please update soon.
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Title: Yummy!
Reviewed By: blade_redwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love it. Although the idea is not completely original, it is expected of many Escaflone Hitomi/Van reunion fics. o.O I don't think many of us can imagine Van with Hitomi on earth. After all the boy does have a kingdom to run. Overall I really loved it. -sniffs- I still think Allen should have gotten with Aries though. -sigh- -.-;....
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Reviewed By: Bandersnatch On: March 05, 2004 19:21 CST
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YAY and update. It's getting exciting. I love it!
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Title: Wikkid!
Reviewed By: LoudLove [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im really indoobidly enjoying your fanfic. I like your style of writing and the story itself. I like fluff....mmmmm fluffiness is good...*hint MORE hint* I do hope you get more of this story out soon..or I will die a bloody horrible death..I hope you dony want that -Carrie
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Reviewed By: LiL Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 19:18 CST
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good stuff, cant wait til ya update!
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Reviewed By: Bandersnatch On: February 08, 2004 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on... dont' quit now. you can't leave a person hanging like that. I really enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: LiL Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'ello! i like this! no one ever writes escaflowne, and quite frankly, it sucks! i love that movie, and i wish everyone saw it so they would write more of it. But i do have one qualm, and thats how u keep using their names. You dont need to use Van every time your talking about him. The same with Hitomi. Use her and him and she and he. It sounds better and makes the story more real. (for some strange reason ne way :p)Any who, I love this and cant wait for you to continue it! LiL Elf
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Reviewed By: cassey On: February 07, 2004 20:02 CST
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i really like this story and you should continue with it so that i can find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Zen/Zsenny On: February 07, 2004 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Please continue writing this, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Night of the Raven a.k.a Dhampir On: February 06, 2004 21:10 CST
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Im too lazy to sign into my Dhampir name so yeah ....write more
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Reviewed By: morgansgirl23 On: February 06, 2004 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this fanfic was a great continuation of the "Escaflowne" series. I've always wondered what happened to Hitome and Van's love after she returned home. The fic, I believe, did the series justice and I can't wait to see how their futures unfold in later chapters. Keep up the good work!!
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