| "Starting Over" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Title: WHAT???
Reviewed By: AngelOfBlades [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 20:50 CST
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Hiei?? DEAD? HIEI IS TO COOL TO DIE! USE THE DARK TOURNAMENT'S PRIZE, OR THE DRAGONBALLS OR SOMETHING TO BRING HIM BACK!!!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 15:23 CST
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Reviewed By: YoukoKurama201 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 14:51 CST
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You evil evil person!!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: March 23, 2004 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is horrible. You obviously don't know the English language. Not to mention that the story is a complete disaster. Never write again.
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: March 23, 2004 10:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is horrible. You obviously don't know the English language. Not to mention that the story is a complete disaster. Never write again.
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 22:27 CST
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Title: heres the info on her
Reviewed By: Reiya Moon On: March 22, 2004 21:57 CST
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Name: Kiama Samoyi Discription: I have long deep amber colored hair, with deep forest green eyes along with 2 black fuzzy doggy ears with 2 looped earings on each a tail that matches my hair and it has a black tip 3 moon on my forehead 2 cresent 1 on the outside then a nother inside the spot that's left and a whole moon in the space that leaves. Attacks:I'm a fire elemental and can use any fire attack. Stranths:Fire martial arts. Weaknesses: My childlike inosence,my Couriosity, my nieave'ativity, my loyalaty to my friends and the greatest of all.....food. Personalty: I love to watch the suffering of others, Happy go lucky attude mixed with what we consider blonde behaver and is veary homicidal
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 15:31 CST
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: March 22, 2004 08:35 CST
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AHHH! HIEI, NOOOO! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 07:12 CST
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Reviewed By: Reiya Moon On: March 21, 2004 23:37 CST
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I love it you got my personalty right thats so cool but what happened to Hiei is he hurt will he live will he grow cucombers out of his nose *hides bag of sugar behind back* will I get further with shippo in the next chapter will he let his gard down and tell me his real name hopefuly all this and more will be answered in the next chapterplease update soon
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 21:54 CST
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Reviewed By: L_ifless_K_anna On: March 21, 2004 20:39 CST
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o.O iono why but it doesnt let me use my nickname so i puted lines under hehe .. newayz umm i luv this stori! please update it ^.^ omigosh what happened to Hiei tho? did he die? nooo lolz. update please. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kagome360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PUT UP A NOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!*holds knife to flufflyfan's neck* AND HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 19:20 CST
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