| "Starting Over" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 15:34 CST
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Reviewed By: anomynous On: March 28, 2004 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good fic. I guess that Naraku stole Hiei's soul.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: March 28, 2004 10:33 CST
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wow that chappie was a little confusing! @.@ all i caught was that Kagome was acending (?) and that Hiei's soul is GONE! *sobs violently*
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Title: Kiama's Friend
Reviewed By: Tamaku Songi On: March 28, 2004 09:31 CST
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Hello. I am Tamaku, Kiama's friend/guardian. Guardian meaning Re-encarnated person. I have to keep her from killing herself......do you have any idea how hard that is? BUT anyways, i like your story. Its realy good.....but could you update soon? I have to be in the same room as her fairly often.::stops her from killing computer:: oh, and BTW, that IS my real name.........F**ked up, no?
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Title: WHAT THE F**K IS WRONG WITH U???
Reviewed By: Kiama Samoyi On: March 28, 2004 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I JUST WROTE U 5 MINS AGO AND U STILL DIDNOT UPDATE THE STORY.......I WILL KILL U FOR YOUR IMPUTENC..U NIGEN(HUMAN)..(Holds up another sharp object)
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Title: UP DATE
Reviewed By: Kiama Samoyi On: March 28, 2004 08:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh and thank you for puting me in your story i love it and will mine snd Shuichi's realationship grow in the next chapter???? It better or..... 9holds up very sharp object)
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: Kiama Samoyi On: March 28, 2004 08:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awsome chapter ......will i be in the next chapter more? and Y I HIEI STILL NOT ALICE YET????????????
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 00:23 CST
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Title: naraku
Reviewed By: gale89 On: March 28, 2004 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
naraku naraku it has to be naraku hes the one that stole hieis soul aint he oooooo i wanted him dead before but now i want him torcherd with sharp and pointy objects till the state of insanity no wait hes already insane so just throw some of those pointy objects at him then twist them alot well imloven it so far so keep it up up date soon please till next time ttfn ta ta for now
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Reviewed By: Reiya Moon On: March 27, 2004 23:52 CST
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I bet it was Naraku that evil son of a bitch it's not fair Hiei must come back
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki*not logged in! On: March 27, 2004 20:45 CST
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i loved the chapter and what in the seven hells do you mean hiei's soul was stolen? i can't wait until your next chapter! oh yeah, before i forget... i liked the poem! whom ever your friend is...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 20:03 CST
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Title: i hate u sesshyluver!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: emerald dragon hanyou On: March 27, 2004 20:01 CST
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sorry, the i hate u sesshyluvr was spose 2 b the title. update soon! ja ~~*~~*EMERALD-
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Reviewed By: i hate u sesshyluvr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! On: March 27, 2004 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate that flamer!!!!!!!!!!!shes so mean!!!!!!!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! because of her she made u kill hiei!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*sniff* plz update soon, and im betting on either naraku/kikyou. update soon! (nooooooooooo! hiei!) ~~*~~*EMERALD-
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 18:32 CST
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