| "Never As They Seem" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Title: sdfdszgrd
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 08:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOH OHH! i think i know who called him... maybe ^^ and i think i know why he is always going out... heh heh, but update soon! i want more ;-; XD
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 00:52 CST
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Yoh! Cool fic! Oh, but... For the love of Ra, please space out the conversations, ne! Remember, grammer says, "A new paragraph for every new speaker." You're fic is awesome! Just kinda hard to read 'cause it's all in big block paragraph and I sometimes can't tell who's talking, and when. Just a suggestion, no da. Keep the chapters coming though!
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Reviewed By: Md On: February 25, 2004 22:20 CST
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^-^ it was a good fic, update!
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Reviewed By: deaths angel On: February 22, 2004 09:04 CST
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thank you your life has been save and Haibara3 can you spell at 3 in the morning I can't.
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Reviewed By: Pyro Pyro On: February 20, 2004 21:00 CST
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OOH OOH OOH that was good. HA HA Yugi is funsized! You so have to write more! PLEASE?!? PLEASE!?! where does Bakura keep going? that was so good. I just loved it! please write more! (oh and i love your name!)
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 17:44 CST
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^^; Yea, I get that comment alot..."If u take the 'r' out of your name, u'd be takin' angels to bed!!" Good gods man, I'm a straight girl!! Eh, sorry about that minor rant. Anyway, very nice chappie, especially w/ the shower! *coughs* And where does Bakura go at night? Eh?
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Reviewed By: al On: February 19, 2004 07:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
FUN - SIZED!! i never heard that one before! i have problems with sleeping too. like tonight. or today. blame insomnia.
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Title: aafDSGFSGF
Reviewed By: Deme too lazy to login in On: February 18, 2004 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW.. at first i was like, ahh its a one shot; big whoop... but i was bored, so i read it... YEA good decision. lol, i love this lil story, its soo sweeet, and yummeh (yaoi) ^^ lol, but im confused, it says one shot, but is there more.. i HOPE SO ;_; lol neways, i hope it has more to come, ill read, ^^ bye ayes
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Title: Damn you, Media Miner!!!
Reviewed By: Mooselini McSqueegee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 19:22 CST
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Media Miner's being a dumbass, so I'm just checking on something..... don't mind this! Just ignore it....
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Reviewed By: Yami Yue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 19:21 CST
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This is a great story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. Are you going to reveal why Bakura was going out later on or is that just something you'll leave us readers to wonder about? I'll be looking for the next chapter.
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Title: (Sweatdrop)
Reviewed By: Haibara3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 05:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I'd like to point out Death angel spelled "Forced" wrong which makes me question his or her age. Secondly this fic had a few spelling errors. THIS IS NOT A FLAME!!!! I enjoyed the first one especially the lemon and Yaoi. Q. How did you check that it was possible... No no never mind don't tell me. As I said the first one was good but the second one was better. Despite somne areas which was just plain jibberish. Anyway Bakura's joke was really great. It made me laugh and I hardly laugh at all. Please continue this or any other fic. JUST DON'T WITHER AWAY AND DISAPPEAR LIKE OTHERS IN THE PAST, THAT WROTE GREAT FICS BUT EVENTUALLY JUST STOPPED WRITING! Anyway hope you get more reviews you deserve it.
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Reviewed By: deaths angel On: February 17, 2004 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well done wright more or I will be forst to kill you.
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Reviewed By: Moan my name the hentai On: February 15, 2004 04:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Good! Mmmmmmnnhhhhh...... Boys who just read this must be jerking themselves now!
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Reviewed By: Pyro Pryo On: February 11, 2004 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I TOTALLY & THROUGHLY ENJOYED THAT!!! Specially the partwhere he's like "Or... please fuck me?" oh i loved it!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 15:52 CST
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^_^ Veeery good story, I really like it. And most of all, great lemon, especially when Ryou undid Bakura's pants w/ his teeth. I would like to do that...ja ne!
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