| "Kagome Decisions" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: YinYang236 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 21:58 CST
Comment/Review:
When are you going to update this story? This is getting to the good part, update please. (Giving the author puppy eyes)
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Title: Could do better
Reviewed By: DAZ306 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot looks good but as I'm reading I dont understand who talking and the Names are OH so right. Spell Check works you know.
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Title: Kagome Decisions
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 21:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: its okay!
Reviewed By: Kaiku On: March 30, 2005 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that was good but not very good. u put too much author's note and u missplled a lotta words and punctuation marks. so good luck with ur upcoming fics... i wasn't really impressed
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Reviewed By: jin_the_wind_master_420 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a good story, but you really REALLY need to work on your spelling, grammer ant quotation marks. If you start writing in this fic again I could edit the chapters for you if you want.
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Reviewed By: Saru On: August 10, 2004 14:14 CDT
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...its good, but you need to find...A-quotation marks, and B a manga. songo- is sango maruko- miroku kiadie- keade i dont know what else you spelt wrong. please fix it. its incredibly annoying
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 01:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
great you finly update and its a great chapter please update agin soon
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Reviewed By: Twin_star_of_suzaku On: July 28, 2004 14:59 CDT
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it's an interesting story, but you REALLY need to find the glory that is known as quation marks. a story is REALLY REALLY hard to follow if you don't know when someone is talking/thinking or when it's part of the neritive. other then that, like i said, it's a very intrigueing story. once you fix the little puctuation problem it'll definately be a story i'd be happy reading over and over. ^.^
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 08:32 CDT
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have you abandond your story Kagome Decisions becase that is what it seems like please update soon if you have not abandend your story its a realy great story im whaiting on pins and needls to now what hapends next
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Reviewed By: ilovesheshy On: July 05, 2004 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its sango no songo
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Reviewed By: a fan On: May 05, 2004 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo u used da word shock u anotha Hip hob nigga like me. U da first Hip hop writa and dat shit is hot.
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Reviewed By: bells_qt (I'm loged in) On: March 01, 2004 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty darn good. (I don't mind waitng for this story) ^^ bye.
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: February 29, 2004 12:22 CST
Comment/Review:
uh fix your update cuz its screwed up try to use a real language for your stories k well cya!
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 22:59 CST
Comment/Review:
WTF? What was that note?!
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: February 14, 2004 20:21 CST
Comment/Review:
your author note is screwed up i mean the words are all symbols so u maby should fix it!
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