| "a New Beginning for the Old Thing Called Love" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lani On: February 07, 2004 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! i LOVED it! that was pretty cool! haha, Miroku is the MAN! ahem, so is Inu-kun! hehe, haha. sorry, that was wonderful. a sequel would tie things up nicely ya know, so i say go for it girl. well, till we meet again... -Slywolf9
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 07, 2004 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can give an idea, not too sure how great, for a sequel: Now that Kagome can control Inuyashas demon blood and can say when it becomes unleashed and when that happens he becomes practically invincible but then a bad side comes out after he nearly kills Naraku in this form: If Kagome is too far from Inuyasha he starts to become weaker every day until he turns human and stays human until Kagome is close to him again, they guard this secret but somehow (you decide how) naraku finds out about this little weakness but can't think of a way to use it.. until Kouga comes again and snathces Kagome away (you know why of course lol) and takes to her to his den to make her his mate, then he notices that she's inuyashas mate and carries his pup but instead of releasing her he keeps her trying to find a way to UNDO the mating, meanwhile Inuyasha and the rest try to find Kagome but Naraku is doing everything to interfere with them... how about that? And by the way, this fic was really great.
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Reviewed By: InuYasha lover On: February 07, 2004 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story I think you should do a sequel about what their pup would turn out to be.
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it! And guess what :D I want more please!!!
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Reviewed By: shadowofsirius [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 09:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spellcheck.
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death On: February 07, 2004 06:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow...
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Reviewed By: Lemons_Yum On: February 06, 2004 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was ummm...wowzers! O_O great!!! a sequel would b odd. just keep it a one shot ^^
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great! hope u do a squeal!!
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Title: MORE DAMNIT!!!!!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty (I'm not logged in) On: February 06, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Be a good lil pervert nun, and write more for this thing!!!!! PLEASE!!!! GOD,THAT WAS HOT!!!! Turn Kag hanyou if you want, I love fics that have Inu and Kag couples and Kag a hanyou!!! There just to cool for words!!! But, DAMN!!! That was a never spicy lemon!! Good job!!:pats author on back: Good nun, now go and write more, DAMNIT!!!!! Well bye for now, till next update, BYEZY!!!! ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 20:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. That was crazy good. I've never read anything like that before. A sequel would be really awsum! Sorry I don't have any ideas to help you with. I'm only a humble reviewer lol. I hope you come up with something though, it would rule. You're an amazing author and totally deserve that self-pat! lol
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 18:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice lemon for a virgin (Ihope you're over 18 to be writing that kind of fic...), but 1 BIG thing. Shouldn't Sango be telling Mir about youkai mating habits? She's the expert, not him. Sorry, but that bugged me.
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Reviewed By: NekoFluffylover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQUAL!! it was super good, I loved it
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Reviewed By: tj On: February 06, 2004 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my all most favorite type of stories id love to see a secquel
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Reviewed By: tj On: February 06, 2004 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my all most favorite type of stories id love to see a secquel
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Reviewed By: JC On: February 06, 2004 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it and I would love a sequal PLEASE!!!!!!!
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