| "Cruel Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zega [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, it's been practically been a year. You ever gonna update again? This the best mirage of blaze fan fic out there, and the only problem is that I haven't read the ending yet. Is Takaya ever gonna admit that he loves Naoe? are they gonna have hot, kinky sex again? Either way, please update, even if it isn't that long.
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Title: chapter
Reviewed By: YanaYugi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 10:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
please will the next chapter be out soon
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Title: You are a goddess
Reviewed By: Zega [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that you're finally updated! I love you with a never ending passion! Please update again within this year?! Please?! I couldn't believe that you updated when I checked my email, and I thought that my eyes were playing tricks on me. Your story is by far the best Mirage of Blaze fan fiction that I've ever read! I can never get enough! I can't even begin to tell you how many times I've re-read this story! ~Zega
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Reviewed By: Kuroshi Niko On: September 28, 2005 00:10 CDT
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This review is over the first nine chapters, and I must say I love this fic. It follows the anime very well and you cover the characters like they are in the anime. My only problem is the Yuzuru/Takaya kiss, I understand the reason for it and all, but it was just hard to accept the kiss for any reason. I cannot wait for the next chapter and I really hope Naoe does not screw up. He tends to be irrational when it comes to Takaya.
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Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 21:23 CDT
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That was quite the cliffhanger. I wonder what happens next. ?
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Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 20:59 CDT
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Hey, it's been a while. Just taking a break from fan fictions for a while. This chapter smouldered with wild Naoe/Takaya sensuality. Loved it.
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Reviewed By: Sinnesspiel On: August 04, 2005 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I hope you actually finish this; looking forward to future chapters. I just read through all of these tonight and will be left likely months wondering what happens--brutally unfair. But that's just so on par with the series itself, isn't it...?
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Reviewed By: Zega [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 05:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is thr greatest fan fic for Mirage of Blaze that I've ever read! Please update soon! I want to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: Silveriss On: June 05, 2005 21:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story. I'm looking forward to your update. I hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: lyn On: March 24, 2005 09:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
an update!!!yay!!i luv this chap,butr at the same time i agree with naoe,i'm sick of yuzuru...and kosaka too!i'm just wondering where r u going with this story....but i'll continue to read your fics! luv,lyn oh!i've made a mob fanart!check it if u liek in: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/14331189/
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Reviewed By: mdfang On: March 04, 2005 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this series!! Keep writing. Any chance for a crossover story from your fertile mind?
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: February 24, 2005 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, what an unexpected thrill to check in for updates and find one posted. This story is one of my favorites. I forgive you for taking so long to update. ^ _ ^ It sure has brightned up my work day! These guys need to get their feelings & relationships worked out. Naoe is so jealous he can't think straight & Takaya isn't helping the situation any by not reassuring him of his feelings for Naoe. Then there's Chiaki and Yuzura! Chiaki needs to just grab that boy and lay a lip-locker on him big time (oh, the yaoi yumminess)!!! ^ _ ^ Kousaka just needs his butt kicked for being such a meddling SOB. Well, thanks for the fine chapter and please post again soon.
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Title: weeeeeee it's updated!!!!
Reviewed By: muraki_rose21 On: February 23, 2005 18:12 CST
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u rock!!!!yeah u updated i'm sooooooo happy i almost lost hope that u wouldn't continue...thank-god that's not the case...i luv ur story i think it's the best mob i've read so far!! i luv the way u portray Naoe...sooo insanely jealous....what's gonna happen to Yuzuru eeeee I can't wait!!!!!!! pls update soon ...gomen for being so impatient.....
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Title: sexy...
Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this story. the fact that Takaya has finally, at least in some form, accepted Naoe is wonderfully gratifying to a yaoi-fan like me. and mirage of blaze is such an awesome anime that it makes it that much better. at any rate, hopefully you update this soon so i can find out what happens to Naoe!
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Title: holy #@*&*! this is amazing
Reviewed By: muraki_rose21 On: January 23, 2005 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowo wow this is great i got so hooked on this story (this would have been great if they animated this he he...)pls write more soon i'm sure everyone is excited and eager to know what is goin to happen next P.S> YEAH!!! Naoe's sooooooooooooo sexy!!!!>_
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