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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: October 21, 2004 05:30 CDT
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Weeeeeeeeeeell You made a mistake. Somewhere in the beginning of the lemon, you wrote 'Otogi'. tsk tsk. Anyway, besides that, it was very, very good. ^_^ Not surprising, since it's YOU we're talking about here...^___________^ Congrats, though I'll miss reading this fic
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Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (2 lazy 2 login) On: October 20, 2004 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, loved the ending ^_^ as I've said, BH I would REALLy like to see updated, but I understand that you said that you're co-authoring that so it's a little out of the question...so whatever you update is still fine with me. Great job! Love all the fics ^.^
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 06:04 CDT
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Hey I havent been reviewing lately, but I have read, and I have liked! This turned out to be a really good ending and right no it's 4 am and I needed something to make me happy for being up! I really enjoyed your story with all the pain and lovely goodness of getting back together so good job, your story was happiness.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 00:17 CDT
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What an angsty story. I loved it! I just love your writing! I don't know if your fic "Teach me Pleasure" is a co-written one or not, but I'm hoping you could work on that one next... The 'training' Seto and Marik have planned for Ryou... I'm interested to see what it is, and how Bakura will react in the end. How will Ryou explain the difference in attitude and knowledge? Pl-pl-pl-please (think Roger Rabbit) work on that one next if you can. Thanks, and keep writing!
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Title: fwee
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww.. the final chapter to an awesome story. The lemon was good, but a little short. But then again, you are pressed for time, no? So, I'll shut up. Lol. Anyway, "Ryou positioned himself on his hands and knees as Otogi reached over and slipped a finger inside his passage making Ryou softly moan sending pleasuring vibrations through Seto's manhood." Uh oohh.. tsk tsk. I wonder how Otogi came to your mind though. Anyway, this was a sweet yet painful story and I'm glad that you got it done and everything was perfect in the end. I like that song, the lyrics do seem to suit the story. Now if you can, update Teach Me Pleasure.
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Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (2 lazy 2 login) On: October 16, 2004 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, sorry for askin for an update for BH then. Loved the chapter. Love all your fics actually ^^ ermm...so, whatever you decide to update then, I don't really care which one. Whenever you update though, I can't wait. Keep writin.
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Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... that was sweet. Everyone's happy and everything's resolved now. Very nice of you to just cut off there and hold the lemon - sarcasm. But it does ensure that people, like me, will come back for more. Since I can't have Regret or Business Hours, how about Teach Me Pleasure? I totally forgot about that one. It's been a while since that was updated anyway. So that can be next.
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Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (2 lazy 2 login) On: October 15, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh! I'm not sure I remember what was going on in this fic (after reading nearly all your fics, I get confused) but I loved it all the same. You're a very good writer, and I think I saw some fanart of yours somewhere? I'm not sure...I think it said Bishojo Shadow on it or something. But anyway, can't wait for the next update! Oh, and I'd really really like to see an update for business hours, but whatever you update will be just fine ^^;
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Title: mree
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So many mixed emotions flying around at top speed. It's hard to keep up, but I do anyway. I don't want Ryou to be sad =( Or Seto either. Glad Jou got some sense knocked into him. I'm all for this story getting updated and finished. Then after that.. umm, I guess Regret. If it's possible that is. But, I do enjoy Regret and Business Hours a whole lot and it's been a while since they got updated. I know how you feel with school and everything. Update whatever is convenient for you, but you got my vote.
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: August 22, 2004 06:28 CDT
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw Seto CONFESSED!!!!!!! ^________^ How sweeeeeeeeeet!!!!!! You have to update soon! I've been waiting since FOREVER for this fic to update!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: hicket?
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 17:08 CDT
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O________o I'm confused!! Lol.. I'm not, but I don't want Ryou to be devoid of feelings, he's too sweet and nice for that. This is all umm, somebody's fault .. XD
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Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (2 lazy 2 login) On: August 21, 2004 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great job!!! I'd say more but i really wanna read the new chapter of business hours!!!
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Title: meepu
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, an update. I was afraid that Jou was going to do something bad to Ryou.. and then Seto would come in and save him.. lol. Such a sweet chapter, I want more.. please update soon!!!!!!!! Stupid drunk Jou.. ¬¬
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I spent a while reading this fic from the beginning even though I know I started reading it at one point. It's really good and I hope you update again soon. There's always some evil teachers in your fics, huh? ^^' not that there's anything wrong with that (like in detention and now in this fic) but it adds to the angst, which is always good. Like I said, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: May 21, 2004 17:14 CDT
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I love this fic. I hope you get another chapter up soon.
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