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"Taishi's Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ]
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 Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 07, 2004 16:44 CST
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Alright, I got to read ch.13! Thanks for sending it to me! Oh, so THAT'S what happened. Wow, Zero sure does have some wierd and meaningful dreams. It's almost like he can see into the future with those dreams. And that mini Baku is so cute! Even though he seems a bit rude. I love this fic! Hope you update soon! Oh, and I put an SDG fic up as well. It's called 'Music to my ears'. And I think I know why you're confused about 'Zero's Downfall'. It's a Megaman story and you thought it's an SD Gundam, huh? Sorry about that. ^_^!
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 07, 2004 16:12 CST
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i do hate him.
 Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan  On: March 07, 2004 15:00 CST
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*Sigh* I'm surrounded by insane people. Wait, I'm one too! I never knew that one brookie can bring that much happiness to whole world. Well, I have 3 or 4 rectangular brookies left so here. One for you, one for Black, and one for Baku. If there's an extra left give it to Yami and mine's Zero-I mean our Zero...I mean Zero-sama! >.< Okay? And don't even think about cutting Goku's hair! Why not cut of shave someone else's hair that you hate instead?
 Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 07, 2004 13:46 CST
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Um, I have no idea what was going on during the begining of this chapter because the rest of ch.13 won't show up on my computer. It ends where Kao Lyn says: "I'm doing research on the little information I gather on Bakunetsumaru." Anyway, the chapter was great! Baku doesn't like guns? En, swords are better anyway. ~_^ Oooo, Taishi's back! Wonder what happened to Zero and what's gonna happen next! Great fic! Write more soon! Oh, and thanks for R&R-ing my fic! The next chapter will be out later today. ^_^!
 Reviewed By: NeoYami(Too dead to sign in)  On: March 07, 2004 13:40 CST
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Duuude!! Tashi's back? I knew it!! It wouldn't be Tashi's Betrayal without him again!! ^^ Write soon, soon sooooon!!!! And why did he take my Zero?! ..I mean...Zero...forget what I said...^^;
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 07, 2004 10:55 CST
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Ooh, cut Kakarot's hair...Gewd idea, I'll put it in Realm of INSANITY! ^-^ See, maybe you should try writing fics! *pushes Black B. closer to keyboard* Mmm...brookie... but is it square or round? 6_6 w/e. :po yum. Black B: ;_; Fine here's half. Black B.: ^___^ *Baku steals it and runs away* HEY! Get back here! *chases Baku* T_T ...Oie.
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 07, 2004 10:13 CST
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I feel lurved again! ^-^
 Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin  On: March 06, 2004 21:36 CST
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I wanna Brookie too! *steals RW's* BWUAHAHAHAH-! *is hit* X_X Sorry... Yay! It's nearly done! Wonderful, wonderful! Poor Baku... ;-; I'd be touche too if that scar was from Kibaomaru... and that... other thing... this is a bad situation to use this phrase, isn't it? *coughs* Ahem... I always seems to embarrass myself when commenting other people's fic's. >_< Whyyy?? Because you guys are very good at writing, that's why! ^^ I have no clue how that relates, but it does. And oh... duct tape can hold Baku? AND fix Vegita's antisocialness? *bows to duct tape* My new hero! Let's see if you can get Goku to freakin' cut his hair now... *advances while looking evil*
 Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan  On: March 06, 2004 21:08 CST
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So much for the idea of it being like the anime movie "Akira." Glad you updated! To congradulate you I'll give you my slingshot Steve! ((Oh no you don't! I'm not gonna let you sell me to this other freak!)) *Sigh* Fine, I'll give you this brookie I found in the store today instead. It's a half brownie and half cookie if you're asking. You did this in six pages during a full moon? Not bad. But "when did you finish it" is the true question.
 Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 06, 2004 19:58 CST
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Aww, poor Baku. Don't worry little one, everything will be alright... right? o_O This is a great fic! Hope you write more soon! ^_^!
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 06, 2004 18:53 CST
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I finished! I can't believe I just wrote 6 pages straight out of rfree will...
 Reviewed By: NeoYami (2lazy 2 sign in x.x)  On: March 06, 2004 18:27 CST
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Baku's very touche...but I dun blame him. ^^; Write more soon
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 04, 2004 13:32 CST
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LOL Black B Kirin! Naw, Ybaso wouldn't do that...I think I'm portraying the wrong image to you people. -.-; Whoops. Next chappie soon I promise!! Duct tape probably would hold Baku. I mean, duct tape can fix Vegeta's attitude problem! XD I am doing it in Baku POV, I just wanted to see if I should continue...Which I am. ^-^
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 04, 2004 13:27 CST
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...I probably won't put up the conversation because I'm 2 lazy! X.x
 Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin  On: March 03, 2004 20:36 CST
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Agree agree! Baku's view would be greatly appreciated. I have yet to read a fic from his POV... it outta be good! ^^ I'd also like to know what happened between Ybaso and Baku. Lemme guess... Ybaso tied him up and taped his mouth shut! :D What? It's worth a try... I think. Anyways, keep it up! It's great so far!
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