| "venomis spiders and a fire demons love" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Master Botan On: April 13, 2004 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story has a very good plot so keep on going ja ne
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 16:06 CDT
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Since this is the easiest way to contact you, I'll use this to respond to the review you gave of my piece. I appreciate the honesty you gave and have added a note to my story because of it. I agree that my story is a little OC, but it was intentional. Anyway, thanks for the review.
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 19:07 CDT
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I won't give an honest review because most readers hate to be told that their work is less than stellar.
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Reviewed By: Kiharu On: March 15, 2004 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, you are really evil. Oh well. That spider bitch is going to be in *slight* pain. Ha ha! Spiders must all rot in Hell. Since I am Satan, I will make sure that they feel welcome.
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Title: loveit
Reviewed By: horrifiedtree On: March 02, 2004 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i loved it. personally i think that the role of hiei really drew me in. its sweet that hiei could care so much 4 some1.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 23:24 CST
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That was great. I liked it a lot and i can't wait to read more. I can understand about the school thing. My mom is getting sick of me being on the computer so much so i'll be lucky if i dont get banned soon. Good luck on writing the rest of if and i cant wait to read it!
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Reviewed By: NightShadow131 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kurama! Can't wait for the next chapt!! Keep up the excellent work! Ja ne ^_~
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Reviewed By: -KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Computer is being a freak and wont sign me in!!! This is KitsuneLover. Uh...either my computer is a bigger freak (which is likely) Or there was nothing written in that author's note...Anyways, I loved the story and it is very interesting. I have one small complaint. I do not know if it is Mediaminer or a writing program, but could you make a new paragraph when someone speaks? Sorry, I'm a blind nitpick and it's kinda hard to read. But you dont have to change it, I'll still read it as it is. Thanks and great story!
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Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a lot of fun. I really like the flow but the dialogue fits together weird so it is hard to tell who is talking sometimes. I look forward to reading more. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* my fox is dying oh he is goin to be helped right *looks worried* i wouldnt want him to die *looks sad and pale* i love the fox my fox *rocking back and forth* oh by the way KAWWEIIII Hiei warm embracing So cute *keeps ranting of the Kaweiness of it*
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Title: NightShadow131
Reviewed By: NightShadow131 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so kawaii! Kurama fallin' asleep on Hiei! ^_^ This is gettin' even more interesting! Keep it up and update ASAP!! Thx for the review BTW. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: NightShadow131 (no point in signing in) On: February 13, 2004 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really interesting! I can't wait for you to put out the next chapt cuz I wanna know what'll happen to Kurama! BTW.. thx for helpin' me... I haven't tried it yet but I will sometime soon. Well, keep up the excellent work and update really soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Koritsune Dragonrider [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 16:41 CST
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me like! please continue!
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: February 12, 2004 19:45 CST
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Very good so far!! Keep going!
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it i wonder whats goin to happen to Kurama Keep Goin Please *gives puppy dog Eyes*
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