| "Tenseiga" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: silver1 On: February 13, 2004 06:47 CST
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Yikes! A litle depressing in the beginning. I find it hard to believe that Naraku could ever possess/overpower Sesho. I hope you have an explanation in later chapters. so far, I fin it very interesting. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: skyek On: February 11, 2004 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going, it was just getting interesting.
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon82 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THA STORY HOPE U UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Horse_Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 17:37 CST
Comment/Review:
love your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jubilation On: February 11, 2004 08:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story.
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Title: Some ideas
Reviewed By: nightsiren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 04:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For some strange reason they won't let me login to give a review..my login name is nightsiren02..Anyways...This is a scenairo I have never come across before.It's really good.Question...Is Sesshoumaru under control of the sword that holds Naraku or not?? If he is he could maybe have an inner turmoil with Naraku. Will Sesshoumaru turn into full Youkai?? You said that his eyes went red and that normally signifies that he's about to transform..If he does than he drops the sword and maybe if he drops it Naraku will no longer be contained in the blade and he will come out and fight the Inutashi once more... PS how did Naraku get in the sword to begin with?? Great Job with the fic.Keep the chapters coming please.I hope I could help you out somewhat. nightsiren02
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Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: February 11, 2004 04:33 CST
Comment/Review:
please continu I like your fic
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