| "In a Different Light" Reviews/Comments [ 222 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 23:06 EDT
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Hey i've just spent the last two days catching up to this story and .... I love this story!!!!! I can't wait for you to update. I hope you kill them all. Not only kill them all but have Rin Kill them all!!! Fuk that, have her rip out everyones neck yea! Except Kimi of course she "SEEMS" nice. Oh and is that a subduing spell I see on her??? I can't wait for sesshy to kick all their asses.
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: May 17, 2004 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chap, suki is scary !! what a bitch...making kimi call her master... errrgh.. anways great chap, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: lynx9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 09:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am VERY confused by some of the text but YOu Must Write MORE. I will die. Ive got SOls and state tests comming up and If I don't do something I blow up. PLZ PLZ PLZ no more cliffies. Get ON WITH IT WOMAN!!! P.S Love story love it love it love it.!!!! HURY
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 17, 2004 06:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yyyyaaayyy!!!!!! I'm finished!!!!!!! And I wish I wasn't because now I wanna know what's going to happen!!! I'm really not liking this Suki character, I hope Sessgy gets her and that headman first!! But what really burns my toats is that they had been watching Rin and Sess doing something very privet and then they went back and told the headman and now he thinks that Sess really makes her call him master!!!!! The only miss-spelled word I found was 'Tetsusaiga'you spelled it 'Tessaiga' and that wasn't enough to bring your grammar rating down to me.
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Title: Must Read Reviews
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 01:03 EDT
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^__^
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 23:52 EDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon this is too off the hook please update soon
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 14:24 EDT
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I'm not done reading yet, but I LOVE IT so far!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 00:10 EDT
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 12, 2004 17:24 EDT
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Thank you! My other on-line penname/user name is kittie le sabre ha, ha, ha. You have drawn the tension taut, my dear. Superb job. Poor confused demon Sesshoumaru! Pauvre petite Rin! Wonderful, wonderful please keep going, exquisitely done. The sexual tension is really great also...I can wait for the full blown citrus on this one! The pacing works-
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg this is a kick ass fanfic please update soon this is great
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Reviewed By: nonschool On: May 11, 2004 05:58 EDT
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what a cliffy must be one mad scary Sesshoumaru on the loose.
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Reviewed By: alia_athena [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!!love!! love, love love it!!!! Don't stop, one of the best!!!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Katina(notloggedin) On: May 09, 2004 16:45 EDT
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oh I can't wait to find out what happens next!! Keep up the good work! I REALLY hope nothing bad has happened to Rin
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Title: best chapter ever
Reviewed By: asiancherries [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 22:42 EDT
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you know what's funny? i was just thinking to myself, before i read this chapter, i thought, "do people in the stories ever go to the bathroom? do they just do that between chapters?" and here, you answered it for me. and quite tastefully, as it is a topic that people don't really talk about, much less write about. but it happens, as that children's book says, "everyone poops." it just makes this story easier to relate to, and more enjoyable.
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Title: ........
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 01:12 EDT
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