| "In a Different Light" Reviews/Comments [ 222 ] |
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 17, 2004 06:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yyyyaaayyy!!!!!! I'm finished!!!!!!! And I wish I wasn't because now I wanna know what's going to happen!!! I'm really not liking this Suki character, I hope Sessgy gets her and that headman first!! But what really burns my toats is that they had been watching Rin and Sess doing something very privet and then they went back and told the headman and now he thinks that Sess really makes her call him master!!!!! The only miss-spelled word I found was 'Tetsusaiga'you spelled it 'Tessaiga' and that wasn't enough to bring your grammar rating down to me.
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Title: Must Read Reviews
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 01:03 EDT
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^__^
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 23:52 EDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon this is too off the hook please update soon
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 14:24 EDT
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I'm not done reading yet, but I LOVE IT so far!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 00:10 EDT
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 12, 2004 17:24 EDT
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Thank you! My other on-line penname/user name is kittie le sabre ha, ha, ha. You have drawn the tension taut, my dear. Superb job. Poor confused demon Sesshoumaru! Pauvre petite Rin! Wonderful, wonderful please keep going, exquisitely done. The sexual tension is really great also...I can wait for the full blown citrus on this one! The pacing works-
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg this is a kick ass fanfic please update soon this is great
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Reviewed By: nonschool On: May 11, 2004 05:58 EDT
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what a cliffy must be one mad scary Sesshoumaru on the loose.
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Reviewed By: alia_athena [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!!love!! love, love love it!!!! Don't stop, one of the best!!!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Katina(notloggedin) On: May 09, 2004 16:45 EDT
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oh I can't wait to find out what happens next!! Keep up the good work! I REALLY hope nothing bad has happened to Rin
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Title: best chapter ever
Reviewed By: asiancherries [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 22:42 EDT
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you know what's funny? i was just thinking to myself, before i read this chapter, i thought, "do people in the stories ever go to the bathroom? do they just do that between chapters?" and here, you answered it for me. and quite tastefully, as it is a topic that people don't really talk about, much less write about. but it happens, as that children's book says, "everyone poops." it just makes this story easier to relate to, and more enjoyable.
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Title: ........
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 01:12 EDT
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Title: please don't stop
Reviewed By: asiancherries [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 19:38 EDT
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i love this fic, and i'm greatly awed by your writing prowess. please don't stop putting it up on Media Miner. i always love reading what new things you have in store for the characters--it's an engrossing and origional plot. i can't wait for the time that i can read it from beginning to end non-stop!
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Reviewed By: Hawai'i Bound On: May 06, 2004 14:53 EDT
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My dear, you never cease to amaze me.
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Reviewed By: Kath On: May 06, 2004 04:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is excellent.....the plot is interesting, the characters precise, and a wonderful grasp of seduction(need a cold shower now!!) Keep this story going!
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