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Reviewed By: Acire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 18:38 CDT
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That was so good!! I love these kinds of fics. *sniffles* IT ENDED TOO SOON!!!!! Oh, well. BTW, thanx for reviewing 'My Last Breath'. I thought I wouldn't get anymore reviews a while ago, but u proved me wrong! lol. Keep up with your writing, its very good! m'kay?
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Title: The Flea Circus is Coming!
Reviewed By: God the Grand (e) On: May 20, 2004 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Cute! See I told you I'd read your stories! Anyways, is that a real disease Ryou was 'dying' from? Intresting enough anyways ^^ Well, I'm off to check out your other stuff so have a grand (e) day! Great story! This is my first review on mediaminer.org amazing huh? I usually only read on fanfiction.net, ya know? Welp later days!
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Reviewed By: Alz-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
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Hallo, Hallo. I really liked the fic up until the end. It felt a little to rushed and slightly unbelievable... like the fact that he 'died' right then and there. ^^; But the fic was really well thought out. Maybe if the end had just a little more meat on it, it'd be ok... and maybe bring up why Ryou was loosing weight? It sort of was left alone once we'd established that Bakura wanted him to gain a few... ^^;; Sorry, I don't mean to be picky XP I still love your work *glomp*
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: Kage Tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
please keep going with what you've got. The more you write, the more you have a chance of improving. If you need a beta, contact me through my profile. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: slifer On: March 29, 2004 19:33 CST
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Great fic. You and kirei are great wrighters.
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You were right about it being a bit similar to my fic. That was pretty good. The ending was very was good, where the ending seemed like a good one then switched to a bad one and back to a good one. I didn't get to read all of ur reviews, it won't come out even though it said i have this # of reviews. I'm off to go read more fics.
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 01:19 CST
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You were right about it being a bit similar to my fic. That was pretty good. The ending was very was good, where the ending seemed like a good one then switched to a bad one and back to a good one. I didn't get to read all of ur reviews, it won't come out even though it said i have this # of reviews. I'm off to go read more fics.
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 18:41 CST
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Oh... That's so sweet... When I thought that Ryou had died, I was like, "Ah! What!?! Ah! No! Ah! Oh, my Ra! Ah! Nooooooo!!!!!" And when he came back, I was like, "Yay!!!" Yeah... Heh. Nice fic. OOC on the 4th chapter there, but it's sweet anyways! ^ ^
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 16:33 CST
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^_^ First fic, eh? Well, it's a very good story, very kawaii and slightly fluffy. And don't u dare let Ryou die like that ever again, I nearly had a heart attack! Well, ja ne!
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Title: Meant To Live
Reviewed By: Kirei On: February 22, 2004 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT RIKOH!!!! I read it about 20 million times and I still find myself crying uncontrollably every time! It's been about 15 minutes since I last read it and I'm still crying! When you showed me part of the first chapter in school I was a little scared at where it was going to lead to but I am wrong about a lot of things (you've noticed) and I just wanted to say please continue to write, you're so good at it! See you at school tomorrow!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 17:01 CST
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I was just allowed to become a member! Thanks RyousGirl567! If this is your first, you should definately wright more!
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Reviewed By: Coirnne On: February 19, 2004 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really good but a little confusing. Well good job but i have a few questions that are kinda stupid. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Celes On: February 18, 2004 21:32 CST
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Awwwwwwwwwww.... *long happy sigh* I'm so happy Ryou lived. Bakura was just an innocent evil after all, he has plenty of reason to hate pharaoh, his life was shattered. And now, yes, he does feel whole again. I've roleplayed that before. And when I roleplay I become the character, and yes, Bakura would feel as if he was finally complete. Then Ryou just about dead there must have really shaken him. It seems as though everyone he ever loved always left him.... but not this time!! Very good fic.
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bad? Bad??! You think this fic is bad?? *snorts then starts laughing* You've got to be kidding me!! This is very, very good!! In fact I love it! And this is only your first fic? Wow. Please write another one soon. Ryou and Bakura are so cool! ^__~ Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Definetly one of the best songfics i've ever read ((only one ^^)) I have nothing bad to say about this fic, except to never make me cry again!!! hehe just kidding, keep up the GREAT work
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