| "Neko Love" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Title: hmmm...
Reviewed By: Enlu Tarsonis On: August 23, 2005 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright. What's up with the Pekinese? Dang shrill little critters. But good idea none the less. Keep posting here, the scenes you consider lemon that get kicked off of FF.net are much closer to Lime. I enjoy your story and wish to keep reading it, Uncensored!
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Reviewed By: ukyou-chan On: August 05, 2005 03:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls update!!!!!!!! too much suspense...might die...heheh..juz kiddin...it's really cool. akane and ranma goin neko together..cool. great work~Ja.
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Reviewed By: foxy roxy On: June 21, 2005 14:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, your story is fantastic. keep up the great work, i hope to finish reading this story soon, but i hate being rushed when i write, so i understand if it takes a while. so, ummm...good luck. chao ps. i love the idea of both of them having the neko-ken, it was awesome, wheee!!!
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Reviewed By: Na (draechaeli) On: May 21, 2005 19:03 EDT
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I hate cliffies please update soon! It's a great fic Akane should tell Ranma he needs to know! ~Na
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Reviewed By: ranma lover20 On: May 13, 2005 11:11 EDT
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good chapter. Cant wait till the next chapter. I hope Akane tells ranma. if i was her i would have told him right away. good chapter...keep up the good work...
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Reviewed By: Madjester On: March 27, 2005 02:30 EST
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NOOO!! I need more!!!! Plz more! Hopefully soon! Write Write Write! I'm drawn in! ::shakes fist:: but it's sooo good!! Plz satiate my craving for more!
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Title: YAYNESS!!! AN UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: March 25, 2005 10:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh.....wonder what's Xian-Pu up to? What dark magic is she going to use? And when will Ryoga and Ukyo learn to butt out?! Update soon!!! ^^"
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (notlogged on) On: March 21, 2005 02:10 EST
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yes! finally an update! yay!!
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Reviewed By: Arie no Shion On: March 20, 2005 19:25 EST
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hey there, well it's nice to know you're still keepin up with this story, since all i've seen from you lately are updates for your Zero-G fic. any way, i saw that you need a beta reader well i'm up for it if you'd like, you can contact me at ariesnoshion@gmail.com that's of course if you feel like it. now about this chapter i think it was actually pretty well written altough i think your grammar could use some help, like the fact that you've been writtin where instead of were, and stuff like that, it's not really that much of a problem, but it would certainly help if you corrected them. now as far as it comes to the story i think you're developin it rather well, although it could be a little bit better, and plz don't tell me you're gonna make akane want to give up ranma just because of her insecurities?? i mean it's quite obvious that wether he loves her or not has lost all meanin since they "had sex" so to speak since they actually didn't get to finish the act they DID get to it. well that's all for now, i'll read more from ya later, g'luck.
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged on) On: November 28, 2004 00:05 EST
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YES!!!!!!! FINALLY AN UPDATE!!! thank you thank you thank you!!!great chappie!
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Reviewed By: kikyou_104(not signed in cuz i can't!!!) On: November 27, 2004 01:04 EST
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oooooooo Akane is gunna kick some kuno ass well update soo please i want to see if Akane will ever get a chance to tell ranma....well update soon ja ne
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 15:36 EST
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WOAH! Talk about tension! Damn, I almost feel sorry for the Kuno's....ALMOST. ^^ Anywayz, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Xera On: November 25, 2004 07:08 EST
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HAHAHAHA! Those two Kunos are gonna get it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Fionn the otaku On: October 28, 2004 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic despite errors such as mispelling Mousse's name and Ryoga H I biki's family name. BTW translated Ryouga's name can be taken to mean Good fang Loud noise.
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Reviewed By: mikeyguy2 On: October 27, 2004 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Need....new....chapters.....now!!....Can't live...w/o....them.....Please?? Must...have...more.....
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