| "Neko Love" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: Arie no Shion On: March 20, 2005 19:25 EST
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hey there, well it's nice to know you're still keepin up with this story, since all i've seen from you lately are updates for your Zero-G fic. any way, i saw that you need a beta reader well i'm up for it if you'd like, you can contact me at ariesnoshion@gmail.com that's of course if you feel like it. now about this chapter i think it was actually pretty well written altough i think your grammar could use some help, like the fact that you've been writtin where instead of were, and stuff like that, it's not really that much of a problem, but it would certainly help if you corrected them. now as far as it comes to the story i think you're developin it rather well, although it could be a little bit better, and plz don't tell me you're gonna make akane want to give up ranma just because of her insecurities?? i mean it's quite obvious that wether he loves her or not has lost all meanin since they "had sex" so to speak since they actually didn't get to finish the act they DID get to it. well that's all for now, i'll read more from ya later, g'luck.
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged on) On: November 28, 2004 00:05 EST
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YES!!!!!!! FINALLY AN UPDATE!!! thank you thank you thank you!!!great chappie!
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Reviewed By: kikyou_104(not signed in cuz i can't!!!) On: November 27, 2004 01:04 EST
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oooooooo Akane is gunna kick some kuno ass well update soo please i want to see if Akane will ever get a chance to tell ranma....well update soon ja ne
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 15:36 EST
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WOAH! Talk about tension! Damn, I almost feel sorry for the Kuno's....ALMOST. ^^ Anywayz, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Xera On: November 25, 2004 07:08 EST
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HAHAHAHA! Those two Kunos are gonna get it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Fionn the otaku On: October 28, 2004 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic despite errors such as mispelling Mousse's name and Ryoga H I biki's family name. BTW translated Ryouga's name can be taken to mean Good fang Loud noise.
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Reviewed By: mikeyguy2 On: October 27, 2004 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Need....new....chapters.....now!!....Can't live...w/o....them.....Please?? Must...have...more.....
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Reviewed By: Tsuki no Oni On: October 06, 2004 16:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good fic but you need a little tiny bit of beta...^.^;;
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Reviewed By: A. Nonny Mouse On: September 22, 2004 22:49 EDT
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>"This is your big plan?" Akane yelled. "Hide at Ukyo's?" By gimminey if that isn't -exactly- what would have happened in the series. XD Great work!
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Reviewed By: Shisou Ikari On: September 10, 2004 19:04 EDT
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I liked it this last summer and I like your updates even better. The Neko-ken interpretation is really good.
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Reviewed By: xsan On: September 02, 2004 08:51 EDT
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Please update. Poor Shampoo, that poor mislead girl. tsk, tsk.
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Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 14:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. You've kept the spirit of the series alive while adding your own touch. And successfully kept it out of the NC-17 land as well. Can't wait for the next cliffhanger resolution!
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 14:11 EDT
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this is a really good story! please keep updateing!
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Reviewed By: alanna28 On: August 31, 2004 04:58 EDT
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I'm really glad to have found your writings. I want original version, so fanfiction.net is not likely to be on my priority list for checking the latest review. Always looking forward to it, so please keep up the good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: crystal singer On: August 30, 2004 20:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating, even if reveiws are harder to get you deserve much more its much easier to leave reveiws on fan ficthan here, But take them times ten and you know how many people read your stuff...most are just to lazy to do this
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