| "Finding My Love" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are evil with that cliffy. plz post soon
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 19:25 CDT
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NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Why did you have to stop there please update soon
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Reviewed By: alimm On: August 28, 2004 03:37 CDT
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Cool story but it seems something happened in the upload. It seems like sometimes there is part of the text missing at the left side of the page. Like about 3 characters or something it kind of makes it confusing.
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Title: Author reply
Reviewed By: Tsuyoku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 10:39 CDT
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Hey, there have been a few changes in the story and I am currently trying to fix them. I have changed it so that Hojo kidnapped Kioshi and not Sesshy because my storyline fit that version better than what I had originally outlined it to be. So please forgive any mistakes and I should have a revised version and another chapter up soon. Thank you all for reading and even more thanx to those that reviewed! The author, Tsuyoku
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Reviewed By: Garet On: June 02, 2004 22:40 CDT
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I like the fic, but I'm a bit confused. You say sessh took their son, or was it Hojo? It said Hojo, but Kagome said it was Sessh. Are they the same person. I got really confused about what was going on. Someone took their son, but was it Hojo or Sessh?
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Reviewed By: Ritsukie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ilove the story so far...thugh what scares me is that i was thinking of writinga fic to go along with the song you jst used. "Here With Me" by Dito" ya know so it kinda freaked me out but i cant wait fer the next chapter keep it up Ja Ne Ritsukie
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 21:54 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Eternal Serena [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
In general you don't really go into depth in your story. It seems blunt and to the point. Although aside from that I do enjoy reading your fic. The only other thing I was a bit surprised at was Sesshy's sudden appearance. He seems to be ooc, especially considering this is his first appearance and I didn't see any reason why he would want Kagome as a mate. it was a bit sudden, but the other characters you did a good job on keeping them in character. On a side note, I wouldn't really call that one "scene" a lemon. Lemons actually consist of detail and wording the scene. From what I've read, just telling the readers that there was a big make out scene in Kagome's bedroom is nowhere near being called a lemon. ^^; Anywho, please continue your fanfic. I really do enjoy your story, and I want to find out what happens. I'm glad they're all reunited again...well with the exception that Kioshi isn't there. Keep up the good work. ^^
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Reviewed By: hulagurl_55 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...this story is really good....can u please update soon?...i wanna noe wuts gonna happen....dis is really good....so please write more ok?....
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Reviewed By: Kahutai On: April 09, 2004 23:32 CDT
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You really need to write more!!!!! This is very,very,very goooooddddddddddddddddd!!!!!!!! Keep going I want to know how Kagome deals with this!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more please this is a great story. well I was thinking after they get there son back sess can take the jewel and break sothat they have to look for it again or have make a wish on it. Pr you can have him seal the well so kagrome and her son can't go back or kagrome herself decide she to stay there and be inuyasha mate. maybe inuyasha come live with her taking their s friends and thier kid with them to kagrome time to live.
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Flindigedy On: April 01, 2004 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like lemon fics...and i've read alot of them before....and this is by far the best i've read!!!!
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Reviewed By: shannanaginns [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 21:36 CST
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well, I see that you have written and amazing fic, and not many have reviewed. I think you need the credit you've earned. Therefore, great job and keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more in the future. :)
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH(not signed in!DUH) On: March 17, 2004 17:40 CST
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OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!THAT FIC WAS SO COOL!!!MAKE IT MORE LEMONY PWEASE!!!!!???!?!*pouts*THANKS^_^Y DIDN'T U SAY THAT KIKYO FELL DOWN A DITCH AND DIED CUZ THE DITCH SUDDENLY TURNED IN2 LAVA AND KILLED "THE FUCKING HOE" PLEASE MAKE IT MORE SPICY!?!?!?!Y ISN'T RIN,SESSY,KOUGA,SHIPPO IN THE STORY?!?!?!HOW COME SHIPPO ISN'T IN THE STORY?!?!?!HE IS LIKE KAG'S SON SO SHOULDN'T HE MEET KAG'S "REAL SON"??!?!?!?!CAN U MAKE A HIGHSCHOOL STARING A INU/KAG PAIRING!!!PWEASE!!!!!KIKYO SHOULD GO 2 THE SEVENTH HELL!!!SHE IS LIKE A FUCKING HOOKER,STRIPPER,WHORE,HOOCHY,AND A FUCKING FUCKER!!!MAKE KIKYO A HOOKER IN THE HIGHSCHOOL FIC IF U DO MAKE IT THAT IS!!!!PWEASE DO IT!!!I JUST STARTED READING YOUR FIC TODAY AND WOULD REVIEW EARLIER BUT I NEVER GOT 2 READ IT CUZ MY BITCHING MOM GROUNDED ME CUZ MY SEXY BOYFRIEND IS A JOCK/QUARTERBACK AND I AM A GOTHIC/PUNK CHEERLEADER AND HE WANTED 2 GO ALL THE WAY WITH ME BUT I SAID NO!!!ANYWHO MY MOM CAUGHT ME OUT AT 1:00 A.M. AND I WAS NOT SUPPOSE 2!!!U DON'T REALLY CARE NOW DO U?????ANYWHO KIKYO SHOULD BURN IN HELL!!!!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH*coughs coughs*HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAAHHAAHAHAHAAHAHAH*Help Me I Am Dieing Here People!!!*choke choke chkoe*THANK U I AM SAVED!!!!!UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE JUST UPDATE SOON AND PLEASE PUT IN MY REQUEST!!!!PWEASE?!?!?!?UPDATE SOON!!!AGENT A OVER AND OUT*crack*DAMN WALKIE TALKIE!!!!UPDATE SOON AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!U WILL NEVER GET ME!!UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha woman On: March 14, 2004 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my go I just love this story, now listen. I have three accounts and they are not working so i belong to this website. Anyways I love the story it is just so, so well I dont know but it is good. Keep it up.
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