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Reviewed By: Rinni On: March 10, 2004 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really really well done. The plot twists add on the suspense there! Keep it up ^.^
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Title: It reminded me something...
Reviewed By: The Person who doesnt wanna sign on.... On: March 07, 2004 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how its coming out! Can't wait for the nexy chapter! Although the last chapter (4) - I really liked it cuz it reminded me of something that happened to me 4 weeks ago. I got really drunk one night t my friend's bf's house and did a VERY BAD thing so I ended up crying a few tears, and I fel[ asleep in my best guy friend's arms. I woke up in them too. The morning after was beautiful. ^ ^
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story this is the first Kingdom Heart story! Very interesting and cool I love yaoi fic!!! Especially Riku/Sora fics!!!
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Reviewed By: Kikyobashergirl On: February 28, 2004 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
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Evil Ansem Grrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!! He makes me so mad !!!! Stupid evil horny bad tall creepy teacher!
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Reviewed By: Bleeding Star Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, its not so fast that you get lost and its not so slow that you lose interest. However something that did make me curious is that in a place of 5,000 known for its oceans and beach there seemed to be no one ON the beach in chapter two, besides that and a little grammer I enjoyed it, I hope you continue. BSG
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Title: Just Good
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwww it's so sweet with SoraXRiku. It's hard to picture Riku and Sora kiss. Well please update. This fanfic is pretty cool. I pictured Riku wearing black clothes *drool*
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: GirTheCatGirl@msn.com On: February 20, 2004 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw man. The mental image of a punked out riku just makes me drool. ^_^ I love it so far so please continue! I'll be waiting!
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Reviewed By: emi- chan On: February 19, 2004 15:05 CST
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i love ur story keep it up for me ne? I love Riku being like that and Sora being innocent hehe.
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