| "Talking in His Sleep" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 11:38 CDT
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YOU KNOW WHAT YOU COULD DO IF YOU WANTED IS YOU COULD WRITE A SECCOND STORY THE SAME AS THIS ONE ONLY ONE IS A KAG/INU THE OTHER IS A KOUG/KAG. BUT I STILL VOTE FOR KOUGA/KAG
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 11:36 CDT
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WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE? I LOVE THIS STORY IT JUST TAKES TOOOO LOONG! AND I HOPR THAT IT WILL BE A KOUGA/KAGOME PAIRING MOST STORIES ARE KAG/INU THERE NEEDS TO AN ALTERNATE PAIRING TOO.
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: August 11, 2004 21:29 CDT
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OK, are you trippin on acid! of course kag and inu HAVE to be together! its the ONLY way! but you know what, you really need to hurry and update this story,cause its taking sooooo incredibly long.so pleeeease hurry and update
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Reviewed By: inu fan (but it won't let me log on) On: August 11, 2004 21:12 CDT
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MUST HAVE INUYASHA AND KAGOME TOGETHER!!!!! I VOTE FOR INU/KAG!!!!!!! I am a die hard Inu/Kag fan! Great story update soon
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Reviewed By: Tuborgwolf On: August 02, 2004 10:29 CDT
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aka silver1 - love the story... my vote goes to ... Kouga! Kouga! Kouga! I like Kouga/Kag pairings... and get tired of the Inu/kag fight, she runs away, comes back to him & everything's hunk-dory again- type stories!
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Reviewed By: myrrdinowl On: July 31, 2004 00:26 CDT
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the pairing had so better be inuyasha and kagome. i have never been a fan of kag/kouga fics and while i can see how this story might turn out that way, i still think that the great idiot deserves a chance to pull his head out of his ass and realize what it is that he has and what it is that he is in danger of loosing.
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Title: Little Nothings... Rambblings on the Run
Reviewed By: wingless_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 10:36 CDT
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I simply love the plot you've got going there... on the one hand we know that in end she will most likely end up with Inuyasha but the path the story takes to achieve said goal is often hard and treacherous to master... and personally I think...not that my opinion matters much or stands for many things... you're doing a marvelous job... i love how you capture their emotions… Although I think you could add a bit more detail... also it's good that you decided to involve and add Kouga's thinking process to help the reader evaluate and better understand him and the storyline... Inuyasha's denial is priceless just as Miroku's bold and selfless...mostly... support for Kagome is genuine and heartfelt... I like the bit on Edo... and Kikyo's reprise of her one and only plan to take Inuyasha bad to hell with her is undeniably beautiful... simply because that is all she has planned for him... no love hides behind her lifeless and listless orbs... her "life" as one might call it does not center on Inuyasha as much as his mind keeps cycling and brooding on her and his immortal promise to her... after all she has better things to do... she's not mad or hate filled...well maybe just a bit...just determined to make him pay and all that is vengeance... by the way if you couldn't tell from all of my ramblings I just adore your story and think you're doing a fantastic job... keep it up... and notice I think I used up just about all of my 1500 characters...And I can still say all this of n |
Reviewed By: blob of doom On: July 25, 2004 19:29 CDT
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hmmmmmm..... i was viewing belledaynight's personal profile when i saw this site.... the story and grammar are great, but i found a typo in "Lullabies"...: "I can't tell you Inuyasha, you have to remeber on your own." you spelled "remember" wrong.... the other thing about ur story is the plot.... i'm not much of a fanfic author, but i think the plot is a little, ummmm...overwhelming? i don't kno,but it's just my personal opinion... the rest is great though...
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: July 25, 2004 00:46 CDT
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pleeeeeeease update soon, im so frickin impatient, i know! but pleeeease im dying to hear what happens this story is soo amazing , its really rare to find a good story now, all im hearing is sess and kag and im damn sick of it! and losts that are inu and kag are horrible, but i really love this one its so great! please update soon. i'll be checking regularlly lol.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 17:12 CDT
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Damn. This soap opera keeps getting better. Poor Inu what is he going to do? Love the story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: July 19, 2004 14:03 CDT
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AAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OH DEAR LORD!!! you caaaaaan't make kagome fall in love with kouga,its just.. not right!!!!She could never truly love him, and no matter what inuyasha does to her, kagome will always love him! and everyone loves kagome and inuyasha together, and they are just... meant to be! i think you'd lose alooooot of readers if you switched the pairing. and this is an amazing story!!! please just keep inu and kag together , they're the most beautiful couple ever! oh and GREAT CHAPTER! im glad inu finally found out what he did!ans i just hope he finds out what happened to kagome in edo. i want him to feel bad for what he did
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(n.s.o.) On: July 16, 2004 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no miss missy! *holds back giggle and pretends to be mad* Yes I called you miss missy! After putting us through all that angst and drama you want to change the pairing!!!! Haven't you ever wondered why there aren't more Kouga/Kagome stories??? It's because she doesn't like Kouga like that! He didn't love her at first when they met, he only wanted her because she could see jewel shards! Kagome and Inuyasha have something that us poor girls only wish for! And you would deny them that!! Oh the humanity of it all!!!!! But just in case you didn't get the hint I vote for Inu/Kag ^_^ *burst into laughter* I crack myself up!!!! But it was all true! I just put it in a comical way. Please, please keep the pairing the way it is!!! I'll give you brownies!!!!! *wiggles eyebrows* Lots of borwnies!!!! I am so hyper tonight!!! Anyway update soon please!!!!!!
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Title: Inu/Kag forever
Reviewed By: Aewi (not login) On: July 16, 2004 22:41 CDT
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Now he knew what he did. Yes, he has to solve this problem and work very hard to win her back. I vote for Inu/Kag pairing. Anyway, I love this fic and you are a very talented author ^_^
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Title: Talking in his sleep
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 22:30 CDT
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You have asked for votings on the pairing, so here goes. I'll give you my vote and then tell you why. With as much of a jackass as Inu has been in this story, it is by belief that he and Kagome truly love each other. I think the final pairing should be Inu/Kag, but he really needs to work for it. I don't want Kouga to be hurt, either, but with the way he feels about hanyous, I can't see his union with Kagome being a successful one for her. His attitude is just too ingrained into his charactor. Yes, he loves Kagome, but it is as much the competition with Inu for the Alpha Bitch as it is anything else. Kagome just doesn't love him that way, and when you're dealing with Demons, taking a life mate, well, there's no such thing as divorce. This is an awesome fic, and I look forward to every update I see. Don't stop writing, and keep your muse close.
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Reviewed By: chibi-staci [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... i think it would be interesting if she stayed with kouga. i've never read one like that but i dont know... just update soon please!!! :) --staci
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