| "Tangled Webs" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 21:05 CDT
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how cruel of you to not update I LOVE THIS STORY please update and that was so sweet what sesshy said I JUST WANTED TO HEAR YOUR VOICR awwwwwwwww
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Reviewed By: m On: June 14, 2004 18:48 CDT
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well your spelling and grammer could use some work, most of the mistakes could have been fixed if you took the time to proof read back over your chapters before uploading them. But really I like the story and can't wait to see how Inuyasha is going to break up with Kikyou so he can get with Kagome. And when Sango and Miroku get together should be funny. So update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lainey On: March 21, 2004 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, good fic so far but the format is all wacky. Fix it!
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Reviewed By: katz21 (stupid MM.org won't let me sign in) On: March 21, 2004 13:11 CST
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rele likin ur fic.....how come the thingy's messed (words are cut off) ummm i hope u get around to fixin dat.....welll anywayz hope u update soon!! *gives two thumbs-up!*
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Reviewed By: Skiddy16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 16:19 CST
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glad u updated but wat was up with the format? i couldn't understand the last chapter really well. wow that was a mature break-up. wish my break-ups went like that. without the guy freaking out and going insane.......man kag's lucky. update soon.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story so far, though i did have a little problem finding out what the first word of each line was, i tried though. *Sigh* well keep up the good work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 22:12 CST
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idk if its mediaminer but part of the chapter was cut off...
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Title: chap 3
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 20:37 CST
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that pervert...
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Title: chap 2
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 20:15 CST
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ugh kikyo blah...great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: March 19, 2004 20:14 CST
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lol blue ice cream cones? Thats too cute. I hope Inu and KAgome can get together, they're so cute now, what with the wrestling and all lol. Truely hilarious. I canot wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 19:51 CST
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i love your story n i just read the first chapter
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 17:15 CST
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Good chapter, except that it seems that the first word of every new paragraph has gone missing. Where'd the words all go? I could basically figure what the words were but I think it would benefit you to repost the chapter. Besides that it was an excellent chapter! Loved it! And 'hypothetically' I think that Inuyasha and Kagome should get locked in a very tiny closet and not allowed to come out until they have admitted their feelings for one another. Great chapter and story. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 12:25 CST
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Good story, I really love how Miroku and Kag broke up. He was all offended and she didn't care because she knew he really was. Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 23:17 CST
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wow this is a cool story. I just read all the vhapters at once so i cant wait till you can update again!!
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