| "Forgotten Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: sallyo129 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sallyo129: *pant pant* i got out!...agian!!! a restraint jacket, pffut.. did they really think it wud work?! more...yes...a body for sesshoumaru... *bounces up and down* I WILL BE THE NEW VESSEL!!! ME ME!!! Oderly: *groan* ooo...my head...*looks up at bouncing insane patient yellin at computer* nooo...not her again... Sallyo: yes...that will be perfect... i will be with sesshoumaru...yeeeees... *hugs orderly* yes sesshoumaru...we will be together... Oderly: O.O o god no...please... *clings to computer* HELP ME!!! U CANT LET HER TAKE ME!!! Sallyo: *drags orderly into her room* we have to prepare for our wedding sweety! Orderly: *nails leave scratch trails in floor* NUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!! Sallyo: *enters room* so u get cracking on those wedding plans! *closes door* *muffeled screams are heard from inside* o come on sesshy! it's not that bad!
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Reviewed By: Purityz Reincarnation On: October 17, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was definetly interesting, but it still left me heart-broken with the all Kagome returing to her future thing. please, oh PLZ! post the Epilouge II or i swear i'll get Seeshomaru to kill u, then revive u with the Tensaiga and repeat the process until i'm completely satisfied!
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Title: Update soon
Reviewed By: Lady-K [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very very good. me like and could you make a lemon and also have sess kicked Jaken b/c it's really funny when he does that
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Reviewed By: Great work On: September 30, 2004 18:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
GREAT WORK!!
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Reviewed By: tonia On: September 25, 2004 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up with the good work. please update soon
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Title: BUWAHA!!!
Reviewed By: sallyo129 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sallyo129: BUWAHA!!! SESSHOUMARU SHALL BE MIIIINE!!! *clutches sock and looks around nervously* so, there's more? *eyes flicker* yeeeeeeees...more...moooooooooore...MUHUHUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!...yes yes...you are a gifted writer...I shall kidnap you and force you to marry sesshoumaru and i...yes...that would be puuuuuuuuuuuurfect... *hugs sock* yes, we shall be together soon sesshoumaru... Orderly from hospital: ...I told you the cage wouldn't keep her in!!! *runs after sallyo129* Sallyo129: O.O nooooooooo...hes MIIIIIIIINE!!! *attempt to run but trips over own feet* Orderly: *takes sock* ...ooook...you won't get out this time... sallyo129: MUHUHAHAHAHAA!!!! SESSHOUMARU IS MIIIIIIIIINE!!!! *gets dragged away*
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Title: W00t W00t!!!
Reviewed By: Sallyo129 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sallyo129: BUWAHA!!! SESSHOUMARU SHALL BE MIIIINE!!! *clutches sock and looks around nervously* so, there's more? *eyes flicker* yeeeeeeees...more...moooooooooore...MUHUHUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!...yes yes...you are a gifted writer...I shall kidnap you and force you to marry sesshoumaru and i...yes...that would be puuuuuuuuuuuurfect... *hugs sock* yes, we shall be together soon sesshoumaru... Orderly from hospital: ...I told you the cage wouldn't keep her in!!! *runs after sallyo129* Sallyo129: O.O nooooooooo...hes MIIIIIIIINE!!! *attempt to run but trips over own feet* Orderly: *takes sock* ...ooook...you won't get out this time... sallyo129: MUHUHAHAHAHAA!!!! SESSHOUMARU IS MIIIIIIIIINE!!!! *gets dragged away*
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Reviewed By: Ni-chi-chan (not signed in) On: September 25, 2004 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update really soon! I realize that you have a life, but I really hope you'll update soon! Althought, I think I have a very good idea of what's going to happen, I really want to hear the way you write it. You're going to make Sess wait for hundreds of years for Kagome right? Whether I'm right or not, I'd like to read it! Please!
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Reviewed By: Purityz_Darkness On: September 25, 2004 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i REALLY want to read the epiloige soon! Is there gonna be a seuqel? PLEASE, oh PLEASE e-mail me at angel122591@shaw.ca when there's a new chapter or seuquel for this story!
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Reviewed By: YAAAH!!! On: September 24, 2004 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEE!!! UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Amber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 09:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay an update hehe thanx for goin through all the effort to continue this story oh you are bringing kag back right cause i cant stand his tears he deserves happiness anyways keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Uohana On: September 20, 2004 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeha thats foine leave it right there!!! jk jk I love it its hard On the body please update soon and i dont mean like tomorrow I know You have a life hehe But when ever you can thankies!
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: sallyo129 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sallyo129: HE LIVES!!!!!! thoses guys from the loonybin thought they cud keep me away from ur story, but THEY WERE WRONG!!!! BUWAHA!!! *drools* sesshoumaru....MARRY ME!!!! *hugs carrot* o and yea, great story!!! *huggies and kisses u* keep it up!!! *nurses come back and take carrot away from me* NO!!!! THEY'RE STEALING SESSHOUMARU!!!! Nurse: sorry about that...she keeps on escaping and we cant figure out how...Sallyo129: SESSHY MY LOOOOOOOOVE!!!!! *gets dragged away*
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Reviewed By: Inutrasha On: September 19, 2004 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! i have read a couple of fan fics in my time but this one was pretty hot! i am a definite InuYasha fan and i love the sess/kag pairing...i hope you get another chappie in ther i would hate to have to hunt you down....lol. i like your writing style i am an English writing major and you have great potential! i hope to hear from you soon! webbmunky@aol.com
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Reviewed By: Uraki On: September 18, 2004 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STUFFF!!!! UPDATE!!!
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