| "Crimson Nights and Scarlet Dawns" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: ShinsTwin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Im glad you posted!! Storys great, cant wait till the next chapter is up!
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this story is absolutely amazing! I love the meld of Gundam Wing with your own take on the vampire legend. This is a story that I will tell all of my friends about. Please keep up the good work, and although I wish I could make suggestions, there is nothing in this story that needs any improvement! Can't wait for the next chapter, hope to see it soon!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 15:36 CDT
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Write more! Okay, well now that's been said, there's little else I need to say...except: kickass fic. I'm glad you're writing this and the concept of you writing it cause it wasn't out there is inspiring. Inspiring for what? I dunno. But still, go you ^_^
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Reviewed By: Saro On: June 28, 2004 10:17 CDT
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I am very glad to see you're still writing this. :) I had thought that I'd either missed an update--not really that unlikely as cruelly as MM tends to treat me--or that you had maybe stopped writing. Of course, I take longer on updates, so who am I to judge. Beside the point. I'm very happy to see a new chapter, and I hope to see more in the relatively near future. I've enjoyed reading, and I look forward to seeing how Duo interacts with the other Day Hunters. And to seeing how things pan out with him and Heero, because I just love good interaction between those two in general. Hope things have settled down from your move. Later.
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Title: crimson nights and scarlet dawns
Reviewed By: Tashia On: June 19, 2004 17:49 CDT
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I really liked the story and cant wait for u to put up another chapter.i really want to see what happens when Duop and Heero go see the others.keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: priscel (@_@) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 11:42 CDT
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I don't have beedy eyes *pouts...rasberry back, sweat drop* sorry
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Reviewed By: ep-chan On: June 17, 2004 11:40 CDT
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hey!! why does priscel always follow me around! +rasberry at priscel+ She's a stalker I tell you and she has beedy eyes too +snickers+ no really we go to the same school...oh back to teh story at hand, I LOVe IT!! I can't wait for the next chapter, so come on already! +makes small camp by computer, with lots of marshmellows and candy and chips and granola bars+ hey, they're the chocolate covered ones +sticks tongue out+ Cuidate! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 11:34 CDT
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Woohooo!! *jumps for joy* =lol i seem to be doing that a lot lately= Duo feeling outst'd from his new family because he's not light sensitive. Why do they have to be soo mean? *pouts* They are all fighting for the same cause, they should overcome their jealosy and just accept it. Even vampires are different from each other. I wonder if heero's a pschyic?! I dunno why i asked, just a suspicion. Did I tell you i think this story's great?! well it is. keep the updates coming and take care!
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Reviewed By: darkdragon91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is soooo great!!! keep up the great work, i was really entertained and.....yeah so plz plz plz plz plz plz update!! it is very good!! ^^...o yeah 1 ? is it yaoi? if it isnt it should be lol.
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Title: Very Good!
Reviewed By: TeshiKeiKenda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 22:57 CDT
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I must admit, I was a little sceptical in the beginning. But then I fell in love with your story. It is really good. Please keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, please write more! TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: Slate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I categorically refuse to try to see where it's going, if only because I know that it's going to be so much more *fun* to have you lead me through it by the hand. Y'think you know what you're getting into with a vampire fic normally, but it's been fou- *five* parts now and I'm pretty sure that the words 'seductive darkness' haven't shown up yet. It's just... wonderful. Seriously, a great take on the idea and I love your Duo. And all of your characters that have shown up so far, actually - their the kind of secondary characters that make you read over every word instead of skipping to the next angsty-and/or-naked moment. A rare gift, and I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
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Reviewed By: Yurako On: April 18, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really lied your story!!!!!! I hope that you contiue it VERY VVVEERRYYYY SSSSSOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Saro On: April 17, 2004 14:05 CDT
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Heh. Still reading, still reading! I missed the last update, though. ^_^;;; MM.org wasn't liking me their for a bit. I was sort of wondering how you'd handle the bite=infection=turning thing, since obviously if EVERYONE who got bit turned into a vampire, then the world would really be a mess, and ignorance would probably be pretty near impossible. I figured it had to be something like that and I'm very glad to see the explaination. I was also rather happy to see how often you had vampires feeding. You see, I'm a big enough geek to have actually done the math before. I've read stories where vampires kill right and left, and the feasiblity there is pretty damn low, you know? If a vamp kills one person every night, then that's 365 a year. For just one of them. It became pretty clear pretty quick that would be difficult to hide, yet that seems to be the rule. I was glad to see you gave them more flexibility. Despite the fact some of them go overboard, it's still a much more reasonable scenerio. Kudos on that. All and all, I've found you're story very readable. I hope to see an update soon. And not miss it this time. ;)
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Reviewed By: ep-chan On: April 15, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man there aren't many vampire werewolf fics around. This one's very good and i didn't find it at all confusing. Very suspensy, can really feel the tension and newness to the situation from Duo. ((wishes she could squish Duo in a hug)) Update soon.
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