| "Crimson Nights and Scarlet Dawns" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: Very Good!
Reviewed By: TeshiKeiKenda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 22:57 CDT
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I must admit, I was a little sceptical in the beginning. But then I fell in love with your story. It is really good. Please keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, please write more! TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: Slate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I categorically refuse to try to see where it's going, if only because I know that it's going to be so much more *fun* to have you lead me through it by the hand. Y'think you know what you're getting into with a vampire fic normally, but it's been fou- *five* parts now and I'm pretty sure that the words 'seductive darkness' haven't shown up yet. It's just... wonderful. Seriously, a great take on the idea and I love your Duo. And all of your characters that have shown up so far, actually - their the kind of secondary characters that make you read over every word instead of skipping to the next angsty-and/or-naked moment. A rare gift, and I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
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Reviewed By: Yurako On: April 18, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really lied your story!!!!!! I hope that you contiue it VERY VVVEERRYYYY SSSSSOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Saro On: April 17, 2004 14:05 CDT
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Heh. Still reading, still reading! I missed the last update, though. ^_^;;; MM.org wasn't liking me their for a bit. I was sort of wondering how you'd handle the bite=infection=turning thing, since obviously if EVERYONE who got bit turned into a vampire, then the world would really be a mess, and ignorance would probably be pretty near impossible. I figured it had to be something like that and I'm very glad to see the explaination. I was also rather happy to see how often you had vampires feeding. You see, I'm a big enough geek to have actually done the math before. I've read stories where vampires kill right and left, and the feasiblity there is pretty damn low, you know? If a vamp kills one person every night, then that's 365 a year. For just one of them. It became pretty clear pretty quick that would be difficult to hide, yet that seems to be the rule. I was glad to see you gave them more flexibility. Despite the fact some of them go overboard, it's still a much more reasonable scenerio. Kudos on that. All and all, I've found you're story very readable. I hope to see an update soon. And not miss it this time. ;)
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Reviewed By: ep-chan On: April 15, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man there aren't many vampire werewolf fics around. This one's very good and i didn't find it at all confusing. Very suspensy, can really feel the tension and newness to the situation from Duo. ((wishes she could squish Duo in a hug)) Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Alea On: April 15, 2004 15:10 CDT
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i luf it! u better make another chap soon ^_~ and indeed there arent enough vamp fics here..so im glad u made one ^^ *waves*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!! I'm so glad you continued this fic!! (bounces around in her chair while spinning) maybe that wasn't such a good idea. Thank you for continuing!!! Can't wait to see what happens next, no pressure (^_^). Ja ne!
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Title: *Yawn...Blink blink*
Reviewed By: Aine On: April 10, 2004 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I know. Everyone puts all tens. But I liked it, and I'm exhausted *shrug* What do you want? Keep writing, if you please. I'd rather like to know how it turns out and I find it easy to follow. But I'm the insane girl with Nitro glycerin. Don't mind me. :-D
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Reviewed By: Barb On: April 05, 2004 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write MORE!!!!!!! NOW!
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Reviewed By: AineSironaTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally, I love it. But that's just me. Please write more? please, please, please? Bunny
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Reviewed By: pris On: March 22, 2004 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's going to happen next??? please continue, I think this is a great start!!
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Reviewed By: Fire of phoenix On: March 05, 2004 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know, it is good to finally find an original vampire fic! I hope you keep it up and UPDATE SOON! Ya know, I do not think she got my hint....
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Reviewed By: Saro On: March 04, 2004 07:54 CST
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*sighs* I have a terrible weakness for vampire fics. Don't know why at all, but I just can't seem to keep myself from reading them. I do try--because frankly, many of them are sort of painful to read--but I never succeed. It was very nice to find that your story has not, thus far, been painful. Actually, it's been interesting. And readable, which is definitely a big plus. I look forward to seeing how things pan out. Sally, obviously, knows about vampires and seems to have a healthy respect for them. So...? How? Heh. I await the answers. ;)
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Reviewed By: Sarin On: February 19, 2004 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting I cannot wait to see where you take it.
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