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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 On: March 26, 2004 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hot. You have one hell of a muse sitting on your shoulder. They were great..um no beyond great lovely lemons i'll be sure to look for more of your fics
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Title: ToT
Reviewed By: Rain B [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww!! that was soooooo sweet!!! hehe i loved it......
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Title: good job...I'm priting it out!!!
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: March 16, 2004 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read it yet...but I can already tell I'll like it...you already put two of my favorite things together...Inuyasha and Kagome lemon and *scratches head* what was he's name...?_? Hobo..not that's not it...Homo...yeah that it...Homo bashing ...I love you so much for your little feats...your the best until you fuck up and I have to tear you black heart out your chest and feed it to you...but that's only if you become a ki-ki-kik--I can't say the name it burns my lips and my fingers and eyes...to say...write...or read the damn word...well best of luck to you and Love MN aka Miss Nikki PS who cares about spelling and grammar as long as the basic point is still there????
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Title: kaoru-chaness
Reviewed By: kaoru-chaness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT FIC!!! Love it. Again!!! Damn my luck....I cant write for beans. WELLLLLLL......aleastnotasgoodasyou!!! BYE!!!
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Reviewed By: inu lover kag /anime girl k On: March 03, 2004 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fan fic PLEASE KEEP UP DATEING YOU STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Thanks! Also thanks for the leamons!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i can't wait to read more of yur work!!^_^
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Lemons! I loved both of them. I wrote a story a bit like the second chapter, I haven't posted it here though, at least not yet. Anyway, see ya!
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Title: Whatever You Want Chptr 1
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 03:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! that was great:D
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Title: About shippo, this will suck i know...
Reviewed By: Relix On: February 24, 2004 03:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I have a suggestion about shippo.. What if, it would take about.. 10-15 years after the battle with naraku and now shippo is all grown up and it's time to leave and live life of his own but then meets Kagura who survived and well one thing leads to annother and... :) You get the idea, allthough crappy, it's an idea none-of-the-less..
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 16:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Good stroy. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Venom Injection On: February 21, 2004 23:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Write a Sango/Miroku one plz... there are barely ANY of those.
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Title: super_jelly_monkeys@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Crimson Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 21:48 CST
Comment/Review:
FLAMES FLAMES FLAMES ----------> of passion dude! What did you think I was gonna say, hmm? I love it. Lemony fresh with heat to go with it. Dude, I could almost feel the heat. Lol. I would really like it if you did one with Miroku and Sango. I've read one Miroku Sango lemon, I can tell you the name if you want to read it. Just email me. I look forward to more of your writing. Crimson~
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Reviewed By: kittygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
sry i didnt mean to put the writing rating i acually thought it was writen very well
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Reviewed By: kittygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
yes i think u sould continue it from where miroku caught up with sango and make it kind of dramatic and funny u know like bringing up her scare and kohaku and mirokus constant groping to added the humor i really liked the first one so good luck -kittygirl
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: meng [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 04:55 CST
Comment/Review:
well i was checking my mail and i noticed that you uploaded a new fic read it and i like it.. that was so lemony fresh and sure make one about sango and miroku...you know what i think shippou should get some lemon too if not that at least and orange... hehehe well yeah good job... ja
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