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"The Path to Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ]
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 Reviewed By: Sheik2711 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 08, 2004 11:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
So...much..suspense! I can't take it anymore!! *twitch* Okay...UPDATE! BUAHAHAHA!! Or else...*pulls out mega-sized frying pan* Hehehe...^^ update soon! See ya! -Lyona*
 Title: thnx!
Reviewed By: brown eyes  On: April 05, 2004 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
thnx so much for responding to my review. I really think you have a talent! I absolutely cant wait for the next chapter or to see who falls in love. I always liked love stories! Keep'em comin!-ashley
 Title: UPDATE......pretty please ^^
Reviewed By: hikari......(still too lazy to log in)  On: April 02, 2004 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
What me to try and get you more reviews? If I do, then can you update your fic? Pretty please? If you dont...I'll...I WON'T UPDATE NEITHER!! HOW DO YOU LIKE THAT?!? Lol, I'm just kidding, I'll update as soon as I can and I'll try to get you some reviews, K? Ja! ~hikari
 Title: Awww
Reviewed By: Hikari (hikari15candals^^) ....Too lazy to log in  On: March 30, 2004 17:08 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I finally reached the end! And I must say, I've quite enjoyed your fic so far. ^^ And since this is a KH fic, will they ever meet Sora *smiles* or Riku *drools* or even the evil Kairi *glares*? Update soon! Oh and If they do meet Riku, can I have him? (sorry, I'm obsessed with him ^^)well, please update soon! ~ hikari
 Title: ^^ Still very good
Reviewed By: Hikari15candals [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 30, 2004 05:29 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This chappie is one of my favorites....*looks at the clock* WHAT?!?! It's 6:30 AM already, I gotta get to school, I'll read the rest later, I promise! ^^ Bye, I'm gonna be late. *runs off*
 Title: Cool...to bad I can't finish it right now
Reviewed By: Hikari15candals [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2004 18:13 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a cool fic, I'm sorry I can't finish it right away, I have to get off the internet, I'll finish it 2morrow, promise ^^ bye! ~ hikari
 Reviewed By: Linz  On: March 27, 2004 16:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Thats my boy Your so smart! lol. Cept when u had 2 pairs of shorts on.. ^-^ Ill talk to ya laters! Keep it up, and everyone start reviewing!! I want more chapters!!
 Title: ...WOW!...
Reviewed By: brown eyes  On: March 14, 2004 20:12 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I was just looking for something to do and came across this. I didnt get out of my seat until all the chapters were read. You absolutely must keep making chapters very often. Great job! -Ashley
 Reviewed By: Sheik2711 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 14, 2004 17:15 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter!! ^^ Keep 'em coming! See ya! -Lyona*
 Reviewed By: Sheik2711 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 11, 2004 22:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi! I updated my fic, Lyona's Tournament!!! This is the only way I could tell you so sorry for taking up space. See ya! -Lyona* P.S Update soon!
 Title: GOOD!
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 06, 2004 10:25 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So good! PLease update! I want you to write more or else 0_0.
 Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Starburst  On: March 04, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm really into this story . . . I'm kinda upset that 2 of the main caracters seemed to have "died" by falling into this hole! I'm really excited to find out what happens next! Keep up the good work!!!! :)
 Reviewed By: Sheik2711 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 04, 2004 19:34 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! You gotta update soon! I'm gonna finish up my plans for world domination, now. See Ya!-Lyona*
 Title: This story is Amazing!
Reviewed By: CryStyle  On: February 26, 2004 23:56 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is GREAT! I Can't wait for the next chapter . . I Couldn't leave my seat! Its one of those stories that you picture yourself in All I have to say is . . . * One Finger High Five !
 Reviewed By: Ferrari Blonde  On: February 26, 2004 20:36 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Luv the plot line, and not just becuz this author is my friend.. or its it? He's got a great plot going and the characters, setting, everything is just perfect. Keep it up!
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