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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 16:13 CST
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ooooooooooo great chapter!! A possible lemon in the near future? That would be pretty great. I'm jealous of your puppy slave lol, if all kinds of slaves to have, who wouldnt want a puppy? lol I can't wait for the next update, I'm elated that I'm finally caugh up with my updates, I have 30!! This is a great story, kepp it up!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (going to sleep) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 04:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was cute. i love it can't wait till you update. what's next on the list of koga? muhahahaz Krystal.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter... I really should be getting to bed. Thanks for having someone read it over before posting it :) It really makes a difference. Nice job with everything in this chapter! ^^
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Reviewed By: >leah On: March 14, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Red Herring while i do think that she needs to be a little bit more original i don't think you need to be so rude about it. it was okay to have a little constructive critisim but you say it very harsh and demmeaning* i thought it was very good and it must have been because it held your attention and mine and 75 other people and countless more that didn't bother to review. i very much enjoyed this and would like to see more of it, espeacially because you left me on the edge of the cliff!!! Please update soon. I also like the fact that your A frequent updater.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 20:05 CST
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dull, dull, dull, dull, dull, dull, dull. Spice it up a bit. Turn away from the ordinary, and for God's sake, figure out what point of view you are going to write in and stick with it!! You jump from intimate third, to omnipotent third all the time! Pick one, and stick with it! Ya know what? I don't think you know what I'm talking about when I refer to points of view so here: {http://www.freewebs.com/chrithirteen/mArticles.html} there's tons of articles on how to be a good writer, theories on relationships with the Inuyasha casts, points of vies, Mary Sue-ism, Plagiarism, and baby author syndrom. Please do all of your readers a favor and read them all and apply them to your stories.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in On: March 14, 2004 19:06 CST
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Well, that's one good way to shut her up! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 18:14 CST
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great chapter, i thought it mighta been shippo but i wasnt sure lol, i cant wait to read the rest!
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: March 14, 2004 17:08 CST
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aww knight in shining armor! That was the sweetest thing ever, him saving her from Kouga like that. He's so sweet in this fic, a great play in OOCness. I love it so much!!
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: March 14, 2004 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! You have to write more. T_T I love this fic so much. ^_^ Please make another chapter soon, I wanna see more of Kagome and Inuyasha hooking up, ya know. ^_~
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 23:26 CST
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I like this story and hope you update soon with more fluff!!!!! And why don't you just have Inuyasha beat up Kouga for old time sake???
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 19:58 CST
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Aww that was the cutest thing. I just read "Friday" (I'm way behind on chapters and reviews:
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Title: babaka
Reviewed By: not so innocent girl On: March 12, 2004 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read all of ur chapters and i love ur story plz sleep with me
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: March 12, 2004 18:39 CST
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The adorable shippou! Love him! WHAT IS INU'S IDEA? TELL ME! PLEASE! UPDATE! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude i so thought Kikyou was in the apartment when Kagome first heard the TV O_O i was like "Holy Shit!!! its the bitch isnt it!!! damn her!" *domo* but alas! it was the kawaii shippo! ^^;; update again soonies! oh and today was my daddy's b-day!!! Happy Birthday to my pops!!!! : )
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Title: You're Welcome
Reviewed By: Daman 388 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 01:56 CST
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You are most certainly welcome InuHime, you know I'd do anything for you baby. It's no problem at all, your faithful puppy is always here for you when you need me.
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