| "LOVE LIFE" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged in) On: October 05, 2004 18:28 PDT
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RAWR!!! you HAVE to update PLEASE!!! this is KILLING ME!!! must-read-more-of-the-story!!!!! very good. i love this story. please update soon!
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: Cori, Lady of the West On: October 04, 2004 12:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to finish! It's so good and so sad at the same time and what's Naraku gonna do to Kagome? He better not rape her...Or have him rape her, but Sesshou save her. Sorry, not very original. But update please! I will be dying slowly untill you do...
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Title: I Hate Naraku
Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 00:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(counts 1..2..3..4..5 bags of choclate) here CF help Yume with her writing but dont bug her. be the muse i know you can be :) ack i hate naraku. please o please let sessho and gome sit down and talk. maybe kikyou can help figure all this out. someone help. someone needs to get hiten and kagura together, maybe elope? yeah elope! dumb kikyou needs to tell yasha how she feels, poor yasha. btw great fic :) let me know when next chappie is up. but dont set homework aside for it. chin up 'gome there is light at the end of the rainbow :)
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Reviewed By: kate12345 On: September 13, 2004 17:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE.......goes on and on and on plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Reviewed By: Uohana On: September 12, 2004 21:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My gosh your story is soooo hard on the body!!! I was like cringing andd then going " no no no no no no" and people would be like "are you ok" and Id be like i cant read anymore and then start reading againXDDD You really need to try and update quick please please please Ill give you a cookie! XDDDD yeah I love your story It isnt good for the body it does to much to it but its a adiicting!!! Is it supposed to be like that? XDD oof course thats what makes a good sory*babbles on* he moral oof the review please please update soon I knwo that you have a life of your own but you serious left me wanting more!!! I hope that I get it XDDDD please update soon I hope this motivates you!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ryoko imai On: September 08, 2004 13:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sesshy, I feel so bad for him. It really wasn't his fault. And Kagome, poor girl. As if she doesn't have enough problems to deal with. Now you go and add a breaken heart, for the both of them. Please, update. I really want to know what is going to happen to them. Damn that Naraku and his evil spawn. They always have to find a way to mess things up. Please update.
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Reviewed By: clavira On: September 05, 2004 06:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HappyEndHappyEndHappyEndHappyEndHappyEnd!!! X__x Yeah, I´m definitif for a HappyEnd. Hope you update soon, clavira PS: I like your FF ^^
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Title: Sesshoumaru Obsesser
Reviewed By: Hanyou Nina On: September 04, 2004 09:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY FRIGGIN GOSH!!!! *sigh* ok, now that that's out, I want to again congradulate you on another wonderfully written chapter. But.......I WISH YOU'D FINISH SOON!!!! Either that or update more often. And due to the fact that I've been grounded from the computer for a while, I'd LOVE IT if you could possibly e-mail me when you update. *bows* I am forever you're fanfic/fanart obsessor. I love you're work, and I honestly don't know how you do it. And I've seen your fanart......I envy you with a bright green passion. I could never pull that kind of stuff off......no matter how hard I try. Anyway, update soon!!! My e-mail is flutie@innercite.com and if you're ever online, I'd love to talk to you. My aim is dramacutie4. *glomps you* I LOVE YOUR WORK!!!!
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Reviewed By: Arashi-kun On: September 03, 2004 13:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I love this fic! And Kikyo is going to visit?! YAY! Though you don't seem to like her very much... Anyway I wish you update soon. ^.^ (I love how you portray Naraku's character; I really hope he has some fun)
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Reviewed By: angl4u2luv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 18:25 PDT
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Glad that u FINNALY UPDATED! LORDY When will they get together I mean my heart can only take so much anticapation (I know I spelled that wrong) So shut up! NE WAYS UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan*notloggedin On: August 31, 2004 13:51 PDT
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~pouts~ took ya long enough. ^_~ i know the feeling with school back and all. >< it sucks ass. too busy to write plus if you add work into the mix you don't even have time to do your homeowrk. >< my poor neglected story. >< i just posted my last update recently but that's it for while, and i wanna write so bad, but duty calls. ah well. i hope you get a chance to update soon.
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Reviewed By: Guardian of Secrets [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 07:59 PDT
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Hmm...is it just me, or is this story turning out to be slightly soap-opera-ish? Ah well, it's still good! Naraku's a sadistic bastard, ain't he? But then, I guess every good story needs a bad guy! ^_^ Great chapter like always, and keep up the good work! ~Guardian of Secrets
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 21:33 PDT
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Woo! Glad to see you've updated. Very good chapter; so sad. Poor 'Gome, poor Fluffy. Although Naraku is a devious snake, there's something about him that gives me the chills (in a good way). I'm sure it'll be interesting to see how Kagome stands against his "charms". All in due time, I suppose. Keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Title: Angst filled chapter
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 20:24 PDT
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Boy I hope this breakup doesn't last long. I can't stand to see the love birds in dispair. Damn Sesshoumaru for not telling his father no. And for not telling Kagome about it. Can't wait till you have more. Later.
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Reviewed By: Kage Tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 19:19 PDT
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Alright, another update! ^^. I'm soo happy now! But nooooo, not another cliffy!!!! T.T You're so evil when it comes to that...oh, re EvilBitch's review...er..I think she's very mentally unstable, and that you should either ignore or delete her review..even I wouldn't take that as a complimentary review... Please update sooon! >.< and try not to leave cliffys that evil too often without updating soon.
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