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Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 16:07 CDT Comment/Review: Never mind. I just finished reading the rest of the chapter.
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Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 15:53 CDT Comment/Review: Oh, and I forgot to mention: Kouga sounds like a highschool jock. Nice OOCness. His character neede a change anyway.
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Title: Ratings Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 15:48 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is SOO funny! Especially Inuyasha's smart-ass remark about being called a verb and then Kouga saying the cat in the film needed to check out something better than that...well you know. And as for the author's note at the beginning, I think you can always tell the people that are in college and have a job and you can also tell those who aren't and are just making excuses. By the way, are you and English major or something? Because so far I haven't seen one grammatical error or spelling mistake or anything. And I also want to congratulate you on your sense of humor because for just one person to come up with all those jokes and smart-ass comments is really and achievement. And lastly, your style of writing is excellent! The most interesting I've seen so far. What I've noticed is that, unlike other authors, you don't over explain things or confuse us by contradicting yourself, or over-describe things that have no relevance to the story just so the chapter is longer. You know, what makes a good story/chapter isn't how long the page is or how frequently you update and people don't seem to understand that. I think it's all about the material. Okay I'm done. I hope this review helped. I mean, "Kawaii! It's great!" is nice, but it doesn't say what's so great about it. All in all, nice story.
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Reviewed By: cassandra v On: May 18, 2004 11:29 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: more, more, MORE!!!!!!! plz write more.
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 18:27 CDT Comment/Review: duuuuude.....very nice story!!....i read yu take a long time to update....thats understandable...well good story and keep up with it!...and is anywun gonna find out about thier relationship?....and plz plz plz dont add hojo!!!
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Reviewed By: CrazyDevil100 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 07:58 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The bitchin idiot can just go screw herself!!!If she wants the update she can wait!!Wats with the bitchin flamers around here????!!!Anyways love your story!I hope your free sometime to update!!^_^
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Reviewed By: ichie On: May 12, 2004 17:52 CDT Comment/Review: i hate kouga srry my first reveiw is weird. i was in a hurry
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Reviewed By: ichie On: May 12, 2004 17:50 CDT Comment/Review: srry meant to say like miroku* ^_^
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Reviewed By: ichie On: May 12, 2004 17:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it's awesome i really miroku because he's so funny every time he talks i like always i never in my life like kouga not ever.i hope you do more things with shippou i love him and please bring sesshoumaru in i wanna see what he and inuyasha fight about now and it will be cool if sango also fell in love with a teacher like say miroku yuo don't have to do what i say but that will be cool i love your story ^_^ rock on
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(offline) On: May 12, 2004 15:04 CDT Comment/Review: DAMNIT UPDATE!!! I NEED TO KINOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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Reviewed By: Pink_Princess On: May 12, 2004 01:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's great! I love how you added Kouga in that will really livened things up more. I hope you update soon! sorry about that rude review you recieved, people like that shouldn't be able to have email. Good luch with all your other fics also.
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: May 10, 2004 09:14 CDT Comment/Review: I don't mean to be a pluck or a pain in the ass. I also don't mean to rush you but could you update faster. I like the story but you haven't really gotten to the really good parts. I know this is going to be a great story. Now get to it.
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Reviewed By: InuInuPuppy On: May 07, 2004 09:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *slams head on my computer desk*OMG!!!HOW LONG DID IT TOOK YOU TO UPDATE?!!!You know it was a lonnnggg....wait!!I love this story very much and you better update man!!or..uhh..girl...oh can you get rid of Kouga by using Inuyahsa??He always ruins every moment and is so stupid!!^___^ I adore your stories!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagomeangel13 On: May 06, 2004 21:55 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 20:59 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WHOA! COOL! I LOVE THE STORY!!! OMG! in the first chapter...all i can say is that it was...HOT! WHOA!! I LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
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